Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/16/17, 7:32 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
10/16/17, 5:36 PM
Great story as I love stories where guys get controlled. Though I'm not fond of the overly muscled type.
Anonymous
10/16/17, 5:34 PM
Wow, terrific story. I’d love to read more like that.
Bluemohawk
10/16/17, 4:38 PM
Fabulous! I yield to the master!
Willie Cici
10/16/17, 3:30 PM
Technical errors to be remedied. Thanks for the heads-up.
Bluemohawk
10/16/17, 1:46 PM
Okay, sorry about my previous rant. This story may be back on track...
Bluemohawk
10/16/17, 1:21 PM
This story was fantastic pre Javier. Unfortunately both protagonist and antagonist disintegrated and after thousands of lines of print the story became contralateral to the plot. I love most of your stuff especially on wip, but this has turned into a shit sandwich. Still gonna stick with it because I trust your skills.
Anonymous
10/16/17, 12:27 PM
to all those comments that said take your time - this is what you get!
Anonymous
10/16/17, 11:50 AM
I want to see a pic of chad
Anonymous
10/16/17, 10:58 AM
Great story, but unusually sloppy in the editing department for you. The biggest mistake I can think of being 'I thought to himself'. But still a great story that made me hard