Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/16/17, 5:34 PM
Wow, terrific story. I’d love to read more like that.
Bluemohawk
10/16/17, 4:38 PM
Fabulous! I yield to the master!
Willie Cici
10/16/17, 3:30 PM
Technical errors to be remedied. Thanks for the heads-up.
Bluemohawk
10/16/17, 1:46 PM
Okay, sorry about my previous rant. This story may be back on track...
Bluemohawk
10/16/17, 1:21 PM
This story was fantastic pre Javier. Unfortunately both protagonist and antagonist disintegrated and after thousands of lines of print the story became contralateral to the plot. I love most of your stuff especially on wip, but this has turned into a shit sandwich. Still gonna stick with it because I trust your skills.
Anonymous
10/16/17, 12:27 PM
to all those comments that said take your time - this is what you get!
Anonymous
10/16/17, 11:50 AM
I want to see a pic of chad
Anonymous
10/16/17, 10:58 AM
Great story, but unusually sloppy in the editing department for you. The biggest mistake I can think of being 'I thought to himself'. But still a great story that made me hard
Anonymous
10/16/17, 3:00 AM
You people have lost your fucking mind!!
Anonymous
10/16/17, 2:36 AM
Just because women exist in the real world doesn't mean they have to in gay fiction. Straight to gay stories can be written without the disgusting injection of the presence of a woman. Maybe if he'd just left it at the fact he has a gf and didn't make the talent scout suggest he'd fuck I'd be good. But no, he has to include a woman being hypnotized, total turnoff. And to think I used to enjoy his writing, not anymore since he's started diluting the writing with the opposite sex. Sad!