Recent Comments

Phineas
10/13/17, 12:12 AM
You did a wonderful job. Beautifully paced and well written. Thanks so much!
PapaUrsus
10/12/17, 6:28 PM
Thanks, and no, that was not is. I will be continuing with this story.
lifter
10/12/17, 3:29 PM
amazing story series .thank you! cigars, bears, transformation. WOW!
Anonymous
10/12/17, 11:28 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Anonymous
10/12/17, 11:27 AM
cops and skinheads!!!
Kyle
10/12/17, 11:06 AM
Great story. Great writing. Looking forward to more. I am very intrigued where it ends up. Has it all been a setup to get money. Or something else from Mitch. Can't wait to find out.
Oct 28, 2012
Anonymous
10/12/17, 10:59 AM
waste of time! Story starts but then the story dies before it even has a chance to get going.
Anonymous
10/12/17, 10:36 AM
More !! :Q
sexcrab
10/12/17, 7:38 AM
Amazing! There some questions which turn this a interesting story, regardless of hypno scenes or gay sex. Moral and Ethic, true friendship in Mitchell side, the disappointment of knowing that Jason's friendship may be false and possible darker intentions. This part insinuates than "Doc" actually is interested in Mitch instead Jase. Mitch great fortune, maybe?
Papa Werebear
10/12/17, 4:03 AM
Loved it, but it feels... incomplete. Is there a final chapter, or was this it?