Recent Comments

Ursocub
10/13/17, 12:26 PM
Very very very nice. Super glad to hear that the story isnt over yet.
Anonymous
10/13/17, 12:00 PM
The hottest part was when Jason said "Mitch is such a good jock name, you'd make an awesome jock." (Especially because that's my name as well.) Maybe throughout all of this the narrator could be turned into a jock as well, starting to work out, changing his haircut, clothes, and behavior, etc. That would subtly fuck with the power dynamics.
Anonymous
10/13/17, 10:12 AM
Such a wonderful piece. Makes me wish I had a Papa Bear
Anonymous
10/13/17, 3:08 AM
Simply a masterpiece, I can't wait for moreee, please, continue, love the aproach, maybe a stop-brother thing? I don't know, but please go on
Phineas
10/13/17, 12:12 AM
You did a wonderful job. Beautifully paced and well written. Thanks so much!
PapaUrsus
10/12/17, 6:28 PM
Thanks, and no, that was not is. I will be continuing with this story.
lifter
10/12/17, 3:29 PM
amazing story series .thank you! cigars, bears, transformation. WOW!
Anonymous
10/12/17, 11:28 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Anonymous
10/12/17, 11:27 AM
cops and skinheads!!!
Kyle
10/12/17, 11:06 AM
Great story. Great writing. Looking forward to more. I am very intrigued where it ends up. Has it all been a setup to get money. Or something else from Mitch. Can't wait to find out.