Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/12/17, 11:28 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Anonymous
10/12/17, 11:27 AM
cops and skinheads!!!
Kyle
10/12/17, 11:06 AM
Great story. Great writing. Looking forward to more. I am very intrigued where it ends up. Has it all been a setup to get money. Or something else from Mitch. Can't wait to find out.
Oct 28, 2012
Anonymous
10/12/17, 10:59 AM
waste of time! Story starts but then the story dies before it even has a chance to get going.
Anonymous
10/12/17, 10:36 AM
More !! :Q
sexcrab
10/12/17, 7:38 AM
Amazing! There some questions which turn this a interesting story, regardless of hypno scenes or gay sex. Moral and Ethic, true friendship in Mitchell side, the disappointment of knowing that Jason's friendship may be false and possible darker intentions. This part insinuates than "Doc" actually is interested in Mitch instead Jase. Mitch great fortune, maybe?
Papa Werebear
10/12/17, 4:03 AM
Loved it, but it feels... incomplete. Is there a final chapter, or was this it?
Anonymous
10/12/17, 3:58 AM
great beginning...include some visuals of the 2 guys.....
Anonymous
10/12/17, 2:36 AM
Great story!!!
Anonymous
10/12/17, 12:59 AM
This ticks every kind of box for me, honestly would love to see several more chapters of Tim Braun, or other stories about teachers/older men showing off in skimpy underwear for younger guys.