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9/18/24, 8:31 PM
Yes, I'm in agreement, this is another hot chapter and the atmosphere in there is one that makes me wish I could be like these guys too - good clean healthy living, solid structure and rules, sharply defined dress code, strong parameters for safety and behavioural compliance - and all topped off with a heavy dose of scripture study study and evangelical preaching of the gospel. The story just gets better and better and Elder Martell has so much excitement to come once he starts his missionary work and knocking on those doors and being out working hard for a productive 12 hours minimum every single day. He is still showing some signs of resentment and a little reluctance to embrace his new identity but with some assertive encouragement from the other elders, he will soon comply and see that it really is all for the best. His new routine of early morning starts, long periods of shared scripture study and then whole days spent outside in public in his missionary suit and being around such good positive role models in the other elders will soon help reach his true potential.
9/1/24, 8:59 AM
An excellent chapter! Very different atmosphere from the previous ones but no less thrilling or magical. Hope we continue to see more in this amazing world you've built!

9/2/24, 8:10 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) I do have ideas for several other installments, to the point where they are distracting me from working on the one I am currently trying to finish.

9/18/24, 7:07 PM
@[Envious George](/user/show/10012614) Glad to hear it! Can't wait to read them when they're ready!
9/18/24, 1:57 PM
This is so incredibly hot, I wish to be like these guys too. I can't wait for the next part.
9/18/24, 1:09 PM
I would love to see this series continue. Puppets, guys controlled like puppets, guys turned into puppets, guys fisted like puppets, puppets controlling guys… there are so many different directions you could go with this to explore the themes of control, domination, hypnosis, or transformation. Love it all.
9/18/24, 12:44 PM
i want to to be a slutty boi too......
9/17/24, 12:07 PM
Working hard on chapter 4!

Zander
9/17/24, 5:33 PM
@[AnonDog](/user/show/10040587) Great chapter, I like the pace of the story) It's obvious that Dave will get both Mike and Julia's father. But I hope the story will end with an unexpected twist at the end, when Dave will have a big orgy with his slaves, and in the process the mind control device will fail) It would be funny to see their reaction to the fact that they were controlled all this time) and I would like to see the reaction of the men and women he controlled and fucked in front of their wives. So far, few authors have done such plot twists, but it would not be impossible (if the mind control device did not work during the storm and rain)

9/18/24, 9:10 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I agree so much. Hoping that Daves control will be broken momentarily. Or maybe Dave manages to control their bodies physically but their minds are unaware, aghast at the depraved acts he forcing them to do. Would love to hear them cursing and pleading with Dave as he humiliates the fuck out of them. Verbally insult Ryan and how his wife is watching him being turned into a slut. The mention of Julias younger brother makes me hope they'll be added to along with their military daddy. Have them fuck their brother in law. Maybe collect Ryans male family members too.
DMK
9/18/24, 6:36 AM
Very arousing , yeah ! :heart_eyes:
DMK
9/18/24, 5:17 AM
Love it ! 😍
9/18/24, 5:08 AM
It seems like there is some organization or company behind it. The man in surgical scrubs might just be one of the pawns or even also a subject waiting to be milk like the others. Can’t wait to see the next part!
SSSS
9/18/24, 4:37 AM
What in the AI...?