Recent Comments

10/9/17, 12:13 AM
Definitely threw me for a loop to see this pop up.
Anonymous
10/8/17, 9:50 PM
You can edit a story anytime. The story goes in limbo for a cycle, but comes back with all the changes. BTW - Good story!!
Anonymous
10/8/17, 9:43 PM
Enjoyed the series. Thanks!
Anonymous
10/8/17, 8:26 PM
Please write more and maybe go into detail about what happens instead of placing an asterisk symbol. Thank you
Anonymous
10/8/17, 8:17 PM
Please continue this. HOT!
Kane Swift
10/8/17, 8:01 PM
Cheer guys. Wrote this on my phone, despite reading through a couple of times after it completely passed me that I had done that. Lesson learned for next time, gonna proof on my laptop before postIng. Can u edit a story after posting?
Anonymous
10/8/17, 7:48 PM
Got bamboozled! Thought this was a CRIS Kane story. Got confused when the language wasn't up to par with older stories. However, it's a good story for new author, even though the use of U instead of You threw me off. Please continue writing.
Stormbound
10/8/17, 6:22 PM
Very hot. I love that the Jack knows it can be reversed but Tommy will never ask for that now. My only complaint is using the U abbreviation for you. Using text shorthand in writing can really throw rhythm while reading
Boone
10/8/17, 5:15 PM
Oh, man! This is delicious, I like the style of the change, the way the characters pass for it and descriptions! Is all very good, I love it!
Anonymous
10/8/17, 4:56 PM
very hot man, thank you!