Recent Comments

10/9/23, 3:18 PM
I’m digging this new setting for the story; it’s got fun twists and I feel like it has even more fodder for hot dynamics. It’s great to see someone leaning into the casual sex world vibes—nobody cares that Travis stopped working to have sex! I dig it.

9/19/24, 1:29 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) More gushing on the casual sex—the decorative cock ring; the _shoes_, I love the shoes; lapping up the cum from the window—and you’ve got balls, pulling out piss kink in a story for a wider audience, but I love it, and I’d love to see more.
10/5/23, 10:58 PM
This is really fun worldbuilding! From the surgery to the implant to the way life works before and after you reach adulthood, you’ve obviously put some thought into this. And casual sex worlds always make for hot scenarios; I loved Josue’s presence everywhere he showed up. And thanks for the shout-out. I’m proud to have been an inspiration to someone!

9/19/24, 1:23 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I’ve finally come back to this story—I didn’t realise you’d made a revision, and it’s even better now! A lot clearer to read than last time, I know exactly what’s happening and I know the stakes, and they’re exciting. Looking forward to seeing how Jackson navigates the world as a normal human. I also appreciate the moral complexity in this world to have a man as callous as Stellan. I’m shyer of having characters that fucked up in Consummation, but it can be important to.
9/19/24, 1:23 PM
What a wonderful story. it is just fantastic how your content about the strength and masculinity of men is fuel for the passion... the smells.. YES! I love your writing.
9/19/24, 11:58 AM
I love this kid, Jesse. I hope this gets very sensual. The sexy hypnotist ... is he going to start persuading him to enjoy the experience more? You are a great storyteller and writer. THANKYOU
Hell Yeah
9/19/24, 11:38 AM
I absolutely LOVED this! Can I get another chapter, maybe where Tanner is not oblivious?
9/19/24, 11:20 AM
Thank you for the kind words. I’m really glad it caught your interest. It means the world to receive this. Another novella of these characters soon to come! Praise Luna!
Anonymous
9/18/24, 8:53 AM
Is the next chapter the last one and if so when does it release? Love your work

Pcm
9/18/24, 8:59 AM
@Anonymous There will be two to three more chapters. The next one should be out arojnd the beginning of October. Thank you!

Anonymous
9/18/24, 2:42 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Could you have a tentacle chapter maybe and I can’t remember if you did chapters with male lactation.

Pcm
9/18/24, 4:22 PM
@Anonymous The male lactation was in "Initiation" in Hunt Kill Breed. I don't think that tentacles match the theme of tgis series, but it is a kink I'm willing to try in other stories!

9/18/24, 9:17 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I was going through my head and I realized Collin doesn’t exist but he could be a different name and person like same face but different name, I hope you can use that maybe or not fit the story, I would like a same series just different outcomes as well but I have a feeling it wouldn’t work it would probably make it bland and not exciting.

Pcm
9/19/24, 7:13 AM
@[gayfantasylover](/user/show/10013980) Thanks for tge idea! Like i said, i would maybe come back and writeca non-canon route here and there.
Apr 20, 2024
9/19/24, 7:08 AM
Both becoming hypnotized and later awakening fully from trance were quite sudden without clear conscious thought , which beautifully reflected the reader's perspective as well. The narrative, interestingly, revolved around Erick's life both before and after enslavement, but was an empty void during all the times he interacted with his Master. That was surprising and quite different for hypnosis stories. While i enjoyed this quite a lot largely because of this difference, i generally prefer stories in which the narrative is heavily weighted to the process and emotional transition leading to the first deep trance, subsequent deepening and final enslavement.
HypnoMutt
9/19/24, 6:57 AM
Damn fine ending. Loved every minute and every word. Hated to lose Seth, didn't see it coming, but I bow to your tale. Beautiful work from start to finish. Love the time spent in your wolf world, looking forward to more. awoo.
Anonymous
9/19/24, 5:57 AM
Great work ! I would love for this cult to expand and for the police to start investigating it

9/19/24, 6:48 AM
@Anonymous 😏