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Anonymous
10/6/17, 7:52 PM
Make him dress slutier Make him slowly turn gay Maybe make him realise that his "dream" of his girlfriend being filled in the locker room is actually of him being filled in locker room I would NOT make him hairy or tatted or anything. He is a soccer player in high school. He should be a toned twink/twunk who is turned into a slutty gay boi bottom by the people in chat. I think you can easily progress this story in a hot way based on hints you already have in the current one
Marvyn Greene
10/6/17, 6:48 PM
The sexoids do have a collective mind and they are hierarchical in the sense that 'lower' number units can control those with 'higher', later serial numbers, but tiny vestiges of their previous human selves still remain, sometimes much to their surprise as you saw with Jules/Unit3 in this chapter. I have also tried to hint at the fact that Unit 1/Abel still has feelings for his husband Tom/Unit 1000 and vice versa.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 5:15 PM
Huh, so the Units maintain individuality? Interesting, I’d’ve thought they’d all be connected like a collective.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 4:32 PM
Such a good and touching chapter!!!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 2:42 PM
It would be more fun if he was restrained & a gas mask was slipped on him really forcing him to breath these.
Marvyn Greene
10/6/17, 2:16 PM
Thanks for the positive comments nycboot. As for 'Katisha' - African Americans [and Black Brits for that matter] never run out of imaginative names for their children...
screamingmoist
10/6/17, 1:11 PM
Haha, me too!
Slut Bottom
10/6/17, 1:00 PM
I connect so much with the horny sluts in your stories, because I am one. Great writing!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 12:22 PM
I'm really enjoying this series. I appreciate the fact that you take the time to fully develop storylines and characters over multiple chapters. Always look forward to reading your work.
BostonSatyr
10/6/17, 11:07 AM
More of Mr. Djinn!!