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Anonymous
10/7/17, 7:33 AM
Going to admit synthol kills it for me instantly.
Titan
10/7/17, 5:58 AM
This is really good,
Anonymous
10/7/17, 4:00 AM
Definitely shaping up to be a great story! I love the exhibitionist angle. A lot of mind control stories tend to be about taking power/confidence away from the subject of mind control, but so far this one seems to be doing the opposite, making the person feel more confident and empowered. This may change as you continue the story, but I think it's a unique angle worth exploring that VERY few stories go into. I put my vote in for him really enjoying and feeling empowered by the huge size of his cock and balls, wanting to show them off more and more. I'd definitely like to see his endowment get even bigger, but even if that doesn't happen, having him wear more revealing clothing (like spandex, tights, speedos, etc) to show off the size he currently has would be wonderful. I like the more positive self-image and confidence he's getting, keep going with it.
Johnnyadams
10/7/17, 12:55 AM
That was incredibly hot! Find a boyfriend who can turn you into a burly jock!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 11:54 PM
Love the story so far! I agree with him dressing in more revealing ways! Maybe getting new clothes like leather? Also agree with his brother somehow getting involved maybe coming back one day and walking in on a cam show? Looking forward to more chapters!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 9:24 PM
Take your time. Maybe you can find more things that really interests you. Maybe you find something similar. The prepboy aspect I think reminds me of "To infiltrate a cult - Part 3" by Swizzington. Or it can become wilder. The company introduces a hairgel to its male employees, and they chose to do it on the unkempt guy. The hairgel has an obedience effect on him, and goes away after it is washed out. At first he feels disgusted, but then by his own volition, he starts liking it. The other male coworkers (voyeurism) might find it odd and try to resist. Or it can be something like a tie, belt, glove, (ear) ring, piece of clothing (shoe, shirt etc) or other paraphernalia like wetsuit during a swim. Or maybe an mind switches between two guys after they got drunk and had an "accident", one a nerd and another a jock.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 7:52 PM
Make him dress slutier Make him slowly turn gay Maybe make him realise that his "dream" of his girlfriend being filled in the locker room is actually of him being filled in locker room I would NOT make him hairy or tatted or anything. He is a soccer player in high school. He should be a toned twink/twunk who is turned into a slutty gay boi bottom by the people in chat. I think you can easily progress this story in a hot way based on hints you already have in the current one
Marvyn Greene
10/6/17, 6:48 PM
The sexoids do have a collective mind and they are hierarchical in the sense that 'lower' number units can control those with 'higher', later serial numbers, but tiny vestiges of their previous human selves still remain, sometimes much to their surprise as you saw with Jules/Unit3 in this chapter. I have also tried to hint at the fact that Unit 1/Abel still has feelings for his husband Tom/Unit 1000 and vice versa.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 5:15 PM
Huh, so the Units maintain individuality? Interesting, I’d’ve thought they’d all be connected like a collective.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 4:32 PM
Such a good and touching chapter!!!