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Johnnyadams
10/7/17, 12:55 AM
That was incredibly hot! Find a boyfriend who can turn you into a burly jock!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 11:54 PM
Love the story so far! I agree with him dressing in more revealing ways! Maybe getting new clothes like leather? Also agree with his brother somehow getting involved maybe coming back one day and walking in on a cam show? Looking forward to more chapters!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 9:24 PM
Take your time. Maybe you can find more things that really interests you. Maybe you find something similar. The prepboy aspect I think reminds me of "To infiltrate a cult - Part 3" by Swizzington. Or it can become wilder. The company introduces a hairgel to its male employees, and they chose to do it on the unkempt guy. The hairgel has an obedience effect on him, and goes away after it is washed out. At first he feels disgusted, but then by his own volition, he starts liking it. The other male coworkers (voyeurism) might find it odd and try to resist. Or it can be something like a tie, belt, glove, (ear) ring, piece of clothing (shoe, shirt etc) or other paraphernalia like wetsuit during a swim. Or maybe an mind switches between two guys after they got drunk and had an "accident", one a nerd and another a jock.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 7:52 PM
Make him dress slutier Make him slowly turn gay Maybe make him realise that his "dream" of his girlfriend being filled in the locker room is actually of him being filled in locker room I would NOT make him hairy or tatted or anything. He is a soccer player in high school. He should be a toned twink/twunk who is turned into a slutty gay boi bottom by the people in chat. I think you can easily progress this story in a hot way based on hints you already have in the current one
Marvyn Greene
10/6/17, 6:48 PM
The sexoids do have a collective mind and they are hierarchical in the sense that 'lower' number units can control those with 'higher', later serial numbers, but tiny vestiges of their previous human selves still remain, sometimes much to their surprise as you saw with Jules/Unit3 in this chapter. I have also tried to hint at the fact that Unit 1/Abel still has feelings for his husband Tom/Unit 1000 and vice versa.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 5:15 PM
Huh, so the Units maintain individuality? Interesting, I’d’ve thought they’d all be connected like a collective.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 4:32 PM
Such a good and touching chapter!!!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 2:42 PM
It would be more fun if he was restrained & a gas mask was slipped on him really forcing him to breath these.
Marvyn Greene
10/6/17, 2:16 PM
Thanks for the positive comments nycboot. As for 'Katisha' - African Americans [and Black Brits for that matter] never run out of imaginative names for their children...
screamingmoist
10/6/17, 1:11 PM
Haha, me too!