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9/18/24, 1:57 PM
This is so incredibly hot, I wish to be like these guys too. I can't wait for the next part.
9/18/24, 1:09 PM
I would love to see this series continue. Puppets, guys controlled like puppets, guys turned into puppets, guys fisted like puppets, puppets controlling guys… there are so many different directions you could go with this to explore the themes of control, domination, hypnosis, or transformation. Love it all.
9/18/24, 12:44 PM
i want to to be a slutty boi too......
9/17/24, 12:07 PM
Working hard on chapter 4!

Zander
9/17/24, 5:33 PM
@[AnonDog](/user/show/10040587) Great chapter, I like the pace of the story) It's obvious that Dave will get both Mike and Julia's father. But I hope the story will end with an unexpected twist at the end, when Dave will have a big orgy with his slaves, and in the process the mind control device will fail) It would be funny to see their reaction to the fact that they were controlled all this time) and I would like to see the reaction of the men and women he controlled and fucked in front of their wives. So far, few authors have done such plot twists, but it would not be impossible (if the mind control device did not work during the storm and rain)

9/18/24, 9:10 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I agree so much. Hoping that Daves control will be broken momentarily. Or maybe Dave manages to control their bodies physically but their minds are unaware, aghast at the depraved acts he forcing them to do. Would love to hear them cursing and pleading with Dave as he humiliates the fuck out of them. Verbally insult Ryan and how his wife is watching him being turned into a slut. The mention of Julias younger brother makes me hope they'll be added to along with their military daddy. Have them fuck their brother in law. Maybe collect Ryans male family members too.
DMK
9/18/24, 6:36 AM
Very arousing , yeah ! :heart_eyes:
DMK
9/18/24, 5:17 AM
Love it ! 😍
9/18/24, 5:08 AM
It seems like there is some organization or company behind it. The man in surgical scrubs might just be one of the pawns or even also a subject waiting to be milk like the others. Can’t wait to see the next part!
SSSS
9/18/24, 4:37 AM
What in the AI...?
9/18/24, 3:47 AM
I was waiting for this!! And so many things happening here: Raymond just inserted himself into that family dynamic which was pretty hot. Adoptive father? Adopted Father? Anyways, he probably healed some trauma there. The magic from the neighbor's house is suspicious. Is that the previous owner, or are the new neighbors magic in some way? And the finally, stepbro. I haven't made up my mind on what to think of him, but regardless of that, I'm VERY excited for the next installment. Keep up the good work!
DMK
9/18/24, 3:32 AM
Oh yeah , the descriptive writing just class , the control & responsiveness is just awesome ! 👍🫸🫷