Recent Comments

BostonSatyr
10/6/17, 11:05 AM
I disagree - it can be hot to have the changed subject be unaware, it only vaguely aware of the changes, so that the reader alone knows the magic/curse is afoot. Great prose - you need to write more!
Boon
10/6/17, 9:51 AM
Hot! I'm impatient to read the next chapter! Give us more of Tom, please! I agree with the previous comment, it's always more interesting if the characters doesn't seem to fully accept the changes, if they remember how they used to be, or if they're conflicted with their new self. That always open new possibilities and a chance to go farter on the changes. Woule be interesting to know how their houses used to be, how his world have changed and if they have learned something in the end.
Anonymous
10/6/17, 9:33 AM
Wow! Super HOT! I really enjoyed the best friend mocking the bottom slut for having a tiny dick! Always hot when a so-called 'top' actually is turned into a cocksucking slut for his friends!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 5:38 AM
Hot, as always. Really liking this new series.
Marvyn Greene
10/6/17, 3:53 AM
I agree with the above comment - the last three lines of this story are totally unacceptable.
Muscledawg
10/6/17, 3:38 AM
Very very hot! That alpha transformation is really great... Not just the usual bottoms! Would love to read more!
Anonymous
10/6/17, 2:20 AM
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Happy Endings
10/5/17, 11:27 PM
Thanks all for the kind words, as usual. :) Unfortunately I've run through my major turn-ons, jockboys and prep boys, and my initial ideas of happy endings for all characters. I'd really hate to tell the same story twice, but I try to stick with writing what I know/feel, so it'll take me some time to think of another plot.
Anonymous
10/5/17, 8:23 PM
I would love to see a before and after picture of Bryan
Marvyn Greene
10/5/17, 8:16 PM
Aww, nycboot, and I thought you were a fan! LOL