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Anonymous
10/4/17, 5:25 PM
I've read this story on another site
Sep 15, 2009
Anonymous
10/4/17, 4:47 PM
http://68.media.tumblr.com/940064d6e700fb7142206732d1bac769/tumblr_on2r2qEnDI1u4rvn0o1_1280.jpg
Anonymous
10/4/17, 3:41 PM
Oh wow, a story with "monster boy" in the title that has no monster boys. Thanks for that.
10/4/17, 10:39 AM
Wonderful!
Anonymous
10/4/17, 4:22 AM
The substance of the story is great. I can't wait to see where this goes. As for form, easy to correct any deficiencies. Use MSWord. The program has great spell/grammar checking that will help you with grammar and usage. That will help you produce a better written story. Like I said, the narrative was great. Keep going.
Lenny
10/4/17, 2:37 AM
Love this. I like they become unaware of their altered reality. Maybe a sequel for guys into long thin legs or super tiny waist.
Andyrew36
10/4/17, 2:32 AM
Yes there is!!! They get into more trouble after work
10/4/17, 2:09 AM
It's great! I hope there is more to come.
Anonymous
10/3/17, 11:19 PM
^
Anonymous
10/3/17, 11:05 PM
maybe the brother comes back and join in the fun.