Recent Comments

9/15/25, 2:42 AM
Love seeing his progression and lack of awareness. Thanks for writing and I hope you can keep going
8/6/25, 3:00 AM
I love to imagine that now david has jadon, he would left ryan posed as a statue a lot and be ignored like an object cast aside, forgotten.

9/15/25, 12:49 AM
@[Frstone](/user/show/42866) Can totally see that
9/15/25, 12:13 AM
I am loving this. I would love this for myself.
Nov 18, 2024
9/14/25, 11:41 PM
Super hot, bring more cum hungry zombies.
9/14/25, 11:20 PM
So fucking hot! I pray you one day become inspired to add much more to this story. Fucking loved it! Thanks man
9/12/25, 8:31 PM
Your stories get better and better ... BBC Society and now this! Thank you!

9/14/25, 11:20 AM
@[Antnee](/user/show/10043490) Thank you all for your kind words. I am still trying to figure out what works well and what does not so I really appreciate the feedback.

Anonymous
9/14/25, 2:26 PM
@[Hypnomic](/user/show/10059276) This works! All of it does.

Willie Cici
9/14/25, 9:49 PM
@[Hypnomic](/user/show/10059276) You're doing a great job! Remember: when you write, you write for YOUR pleasure. If other people enjoy your stories, that's great. If you are writing to please the readers, you may end up disappointing yourself. I don't see that happening with this story line. This has so much potential. Especially for plot twists and unexpected turns.

@Antnee
9/14/25, 10:33 PM
@Willie Cici Agreed and well said. I spend so much time FINDING writing to my (very specific) needs I sometimes forget to leave a thank you. Or make a comment. I have a few of yours Bookmarked/Favorited and read so many more from those. Fans are hard to understand but yours and the writing here is exceptional.
9/14/25, 9:54 PM
Thanks very much for your kind comments. They do spur me on to write more. I have submitted the next chapter, 'Fundamental Changes' on 14.09.25, so it is likely to be available to read from 18.09.25. I hope you enjoy it.

9/14/25, 10:18 PM
@[Librogiallo](/user/show/10008628) ❤️
9/14/25, 7:35 PM
This is weird ... and hot as fuck for some reason. Not exactly my kink, but I still want to learn how this continues! BTW, you have a typo in your story's title!

9/14/25, 10:11 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, I know it's weird, and it's a new thing for me. Just hit publish from chapter one of another PoolToy story. Oh, and thanks for the heads up on the typo. I missed that one.
9/14/25, 7:42 PM
As soon as Theg said "transform" I wondered if we're going to get a magical boy transformation sequence. It didn't disappoint. Also, I kind of imagined Theg, Fauxki and Loki like the Hydra meme with one head being very goofy. The next chapter sounds really intriguing. Dumb twinks in the force of justice is ought to be good.

9/14/25, 9:13 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) *Law and Order SVU theme plays*
9/14/25, 5:11 PM
This was pretty peak. Great read.

9/14/25, 8:02 PM
@[Vinner](/user/show/10028395) Thank you for the high praise :pray:. This was definitely one of those ones where I was just a bit possessed by a specific horny idea and wrote it up in a three hour fervor so with this type of story it's good to know that it translated over, so to speak