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boi98229
12/1/22, 9:00 AM
Hi! Yes, there were a few awkward spots where it was apparent English isn't your first language, but don't worry! It was not a problem getting the full meaning and the hot content from your great story! i loved it, and am looking forward to more! What is your first language? Where do you live?

12/1/22, 9:25 AM
@boi98229 Hey thx for the review ^^ french is my first language so from France X) , could you elaborate on the lacking points please ? ^^'

9/16/24, 6:23 AM
@[Domino_](/user/show/10016797) I am so sorry, Domino_, that i failed to respond to your previous note almost two years ago. i read a _LOT_ of stories on this and other sites. i typically much prefer to read stories that are complete. I tend to lose track of the incomplete stories, and sometimes never make it back to read additional chapters the author may have (or just as often have not) written. In this case i did find my way back to your story, but it took me over a year and a half! Given that you have only added one additional chapter, haven't really finished the story, and apparently never spent much time on this site, I doubt that you will even see this message. However if you do see this, and want to write another chapter, I will proofread and edit it for you before you post it. That serves to make the story a little easier to read, but more importantly you may improve your English, and we may get to know each other a little. By the way, I also have a love of domination, control, hypnosis, mind control, transformations, submission, and enslavement. I grew up in Canada so know a little French. I have traveled a little in France and Switzerland (years ago) where i got a little use of my limited French. So we already seem to have some things in common! Hope to chat sometime!

9/17/24, 4:52 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Haha no worry, I'm always hopping between websites too so I get the feeling X) as for the story, I rushed it because I didn't like where it was going and got a bit overwhelmed by studies lol. Thank you for the offer but I don't think I'll write for now, at least as long as I didn't finish my studies. But I take you in on your chat proposition ^^ I wouldn't say no to a few reading recommendations either X)
9/17/24, 4:03 PM
I get super "activated" from the concept of men caring for other men ... in all ways! This story and Quinn's comments are AMAZING! THANK YOU
9/17/24, 3:49 PM
FANTASTIC story. I am really wrapped up in it... THe images are so sexy too. THANK You. Do you think that you'd bring the doctor back?
9/16/24, 5:16 AM
Well obviously, Dylan should fuck him a bit, and suggest to Chris that he enjoy it. When he’s ready to shoot, perhaps shoving the dildo back in and cumming in Chris’s mouth (once again being told to enjoy leaning how it feels to be a fag). Since Chris is now shaven like the day he was born, maybe Dylan should diaper him like to too, not to mention a diaper is a good way to keep a leaking dick from making a mess while waiting for John to return. Diaperboys make the best cocksuckers anyway. All they need is a t-shirt and crinkly pampers. Perfect attire while waiting for John to return with a new outfit. And nothing shows off a diaper better than a short cheerleader outfit. Perhaps if Chris is a good boy, maybe then he'll understandhow happy a faggy cocksucker can be. Just saying.

9/17/24, 3:43 PM
@[Luca90069](/user/show/10005501) Hmm.. I'll consider it. I like the idea of Chris walking around in a shirt with no pants but I love the idea of his cock dripping everywhere and making a mess.
Anonymous
9/16/24, 10:15 PM
Would have loved to see the bots working on Batman and Superman when they are fighting crime.

9/16/24, 11:20 PM
@Anonymous If the bots were active, the two wouldn’t be busy fighting crime. Remember, Superman failed to do it when the bots were stirring him.

9/17/24, 1:18 PM
@Anonymous agree. would love to see when the invincible Superman is fighting criminals, and suddenly became a fool who was played by the villains.

9/17/24, 1:31 PM
@[SuperYan](/user/show/10049120) I think that type of story has been done to death by other writers, far more capable than myself. However, I would not rule out the possibility of a bonus chapter coming out sometime in late 2025( break ended) …. after all, the doctor might not be interested in screwing Superman, but Henry may not feel the same way.
9/17/24, 12:49 PM
Amazing. Really enjoy the switch in perspectives and excited to see that setup seems like we’ll get at least 2 more chapters, hopefully even more! : )
9/17/24, 12:32 PM
Great story!! I'm happy that in the end they got even. Ron and Marco had it coming and I'm pretty sure they wouldn't have given up their "fun and games". There's something super satisfying in seeing assholes receive some karma and poetic justice.
Oct 1, 2023
XXX
9/9/24, 5:19 PM
News about your stories? Waiting so hard !! \O^O/

9/17/24, 11:56 AM
@XXX Can't focus on this right now so I might have to release by end of month.
9/13/24, 3:12 AM
I can foretell with great accuracy that our beloved Fate will see to tell of many paths in this current 'saga'. With Nick being of two minds and personalities there are quite a few alternate endings for this story already. So many moving parts and so many developing questions. And how those choices affect a growing number of characters along the way. Its going to be a wild ride reading these.

9/13/24, 2:58 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Aha,... well, I _am_ going to try and avoid the problem I ran into last time where we had all those weird numbered branches with each 'bad end'. Still, how can I resist being a little cruel to our heroes every now and then,...?

9/16/24, 10:37 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Oh I am not complaining. Take this story as far as you want. This is the one series on the site that is still going that has my interest. And this story already has developing branches to explore.

9/17/24, 10:45 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Oh, no, I didn't think you were complaining! You just provided an opportunity for me to air my thoughts. Thanks!
9/17/24, 9:47 AM
Oh, I'm certainly excited to see where this goes. There's nothing more beautiful than a portly, yet elegant gentleman hypnotist. He's going to create quite a work of art out of our personal trainer.