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9/24/17, 11:11 PM
@ Anon #3 Did you mean Alex when you said Aaron? Also, there will be a sexual events in the next one. Remember: Everything that's happening to Aaron, in some way or another was mentioned in the consent form. Even if his brain is messed with, he did give prior consent, and still has the capacity to stop the service. With my first story being the exception, -I refuse to write rape stories-.
Anonymous
9/24/17, 10:50 PM
Good story. I have loved the series and enjoyed it from inception to completion.
Anonymous
9/24/17, 10:42 PM
Loved the story, wished there was more! Thank god for your other stories!
Stormbound
9/24/17, 10:15 PM
Excellent story. Always like racial TF stories and looking forward to more, especially the possibility of forced TFs on deserving targets. Both the cowboys and gangsters are hot conversions. Keep it up
9/24/17, 9:44 PM
Great Part 2. I'm glad Glasman is not out to make slaves and such. As no female staff have been mentioned I assume this is a gay Mind Palace. I could be wrong of course. I hope Aaron stays a good boy for as long as needed to let his hidden self show through. The result should be... interesting. My only concern is the staff looking so tired. perhaps that will be explained. I hope there is a good reason for their apparent fatigue... perhaps the orgies they have when off shift? I am most interested in this. Please continue!
Anonymous
9/24/17, 9:24 PM
So hot!! Loved this story! Really love this series!!!
UchihaDEMS
9/24/17, 8:54 PM
Big old men controlled by small young ones, my kind of story <3
Anonymous
9/24/17, 8:49 PM
Interesting premise. I'm glad you didn't have sex in this one, and the subtlety you use in your hypnosis scenes is very well done. You have great quality. And this establishment leaves openings for all kinds of transformations that you can use. I'm guessing Aaron is supposed to be in the jockboy program, and potentially is one of the permanent members after going through his program and embracing that voice in the back of his head. He's very good at pushing the induction, too, emphasizing just the right places to guide the subject. I'll admit I'm not a fan of the establishment being a brothel of sorts, but it's cool that you have this scientist character who's trying to help people overcome mental blocks, fears, etc. His backstory was pretty believable, too. There are a lot of people who, regrettably, take advantage of hypnosis for nefarious purposes. And if you know the techniques, you really can break down a person's mind like that and reconstruct it. Anyways, as I was saying, keep up the good work. Though, if you don't mind, could you give a heads up if one of the next chapters has sex in it? I love a good hypno story, but sex scenes still make me uncomfortable, and I prefer to skip over them or avoid them, if possible. Thanks, and keep up the great work! :D
Seattledon
9/24/17, 7:03 PM
Keep at it!
9/24/17, 6:02 PM
I was wondering why it was briefly unavailable, but the story was still showing in the list. I'm glad you didn't take it down permanently. I concur with those who also like racial tfs.