Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/24/17, 8:49 PM
Interesting premise. I'm glad you didn't have sex in this one, and the subtlety you use in your hypnosis scenes is very well done. You have great quality. And this establishment leaves openings for all kinds of transformations that you can use. I'm guessing Aaron is supposed to be in the jockboy program, and potentially is one of the permanent members after going through his program and embracing that voice in the back of his head. He's very good at pushing the induction, too, emphasizing just the right places to guide the subject. I'll admit I'm not a fan of the establishment being a brothel of sorts, but it's cool that you have this scientist character who's trying to help people overcome mental blocks, fears, etc. His backstory was pretty believable, too. There are a lot of people who, regrettably, take advantage of hypnosis for nefarious purposes. And if you know the techniques, you really can break down a person's mind like that and reconstruct it. Anyways, as I was saying, keep up the good work. Though, if you don't mind, could you give a heads up if one of the next chapters has sex in it? I love a good hypno story, but sex scenes still make me uncomfortable, and I prefer to skip over them or avoid them, if possible. Thanks, and keep up the great work! :D
Seattledon
9/24/17, 7:03 PM
Keep at it!
9/24/17, 6:02 PM
I was wondering why it was briefly unavailable, but the story was still showing in the list. I'm glad you didn't take it down permanently. I concur with those who also like racial tfs.
Rick
9/24/17, 5:38 PM
¡¡WOW!! ¡es incluso mejor que el capítulo anterior! me encanta, es muy cachoda, sigue asi, es una gran historia.
Anonymous
9/24/17, 5:34 PM
I really liked it! I just couldn't frequently comment as school is catching up! thanks for a great story! Would love to see more details of Tom's assimilation, or how the androids dealt with that lawyer.
Anonymous
9/24/17, 5:29 PM
Kind of sad it's over but i liked it very much. Would have enjoyed more assimilation scenes and details, seduction. maybe a little more infiltration or the first person perspectiv of beeing assimilated. Keep writing :-)
David S
9/24/17, 5:27 PM
I, for one, loved it! Thank you for this story and I hope you post more!
Anonymous
9/24/17, 5:20 PM
I have the same opinion above. Perhaps he can slowly realize that he is in really love with Michael.
Anonymous
9/24/17, 4:53 PM
I like the ytory and the sexoids. Looking forward to the changes in their programming and who they are gonna perfect next.
Anonymous
9/24/17, 4:41 PM
I get the feeling Alex may become an important role model for Aaron. Its be hot if Aaron started to have some body perception issues, feeling inferior next to Alex's much bigger, built muscles and prodigious cock. It could be a fun motivator for Aaron to start to want to be like Alex...perhaps to the point of crushing on and then worshipping Alex. Very hot concept for this story! I'll look forward to more whatever you develop.