Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/23/17, 8:10 PM
u never going to 'continue' this?
Anonymous
9/23/17, 7:17 PM
¡Muy buena historia! ¿tienes más? ojalá escribiras una continuación, con Héctor en su nueva vida embrutecido.
9/23/17, 7:04 PM
Great story! I hope there will be more parts/sequels/additions!
9/23/17, 5:21 PM
I also did some editing, so the story will be easier to read. I am thinking about writing a story with a forced change involved, maybe a Trump fan being changed. I also want to write a cholo story as well.
Anonymous
9/23/17, 5:07 PM
I agree with above, I need more of this
BlindSeer0
9/23/17, 5:00 PM
I loved your last story, and I'm loving this one. Trying to work consent into MC stories has always been a goal of mine, and its great to see you suceeding. The bait and switch where it looked like the main character would be Mike but is probably Aaron was well done. I hope Aaron enjoys becoming a good boy.
PaisaGringo
9/23/17, 4:51 PM
Thanks guys. This was my first story ever actually heh. I love transformational stories and I wouldn't mind this story becoming reality heh. When I get some time, I will try to write more...
Anonymous
9/23/17, 4:06 PM
OH, fuck, this was great, compa! is the first transformation story that I found of this style, and I love it! Very hot, with all of those details of narcocorridos, tejanas and the words in Spanish. I like the change of name, and the use of joints. It is great in the way it is, but would be cool if you add more phisical details or descriptions of clothes, mentioning big belt buckles, exotic boots or stuff like that. Do you have more stories like this one? Do you like this kind of changes? I'd love to read more! You could make stories changing boy bands of pretty pop singers into mexican banda singers or ranchero singers (just imagine, from one Direction, to Juan Directo ha, ha). I've always imagined a story of a blond gringo student being changed into a very tanned chuntaro tribalero, that would be very hot to read!
Anonymous
9/23/17, 3:50 PM
love the focus n consent. such a nice change of pace ^_^
soujiru@gmail.com
9/23/17, 3:48 PM
Gracias, siento un poco lo de los cambios de narrador, es que algunas de ellos no son cambios sino pensamientos de Hector... los había colocado espaciados para que se diferenciaran, pero al subirlo parece ser que quedó como un bloque todo T.T, ya creo haber logrado hacer las correcciones. Agradezco mucho los comenetarios, me alegra que disfrutaran de mi historia :3