Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/23/17, 3:10 PM
I'd like to see where the author takes this story. Has potential.
Bulk
9/23/17, 2:52 PM
Buena historia, me gustó mucho, espero ver más de Hector. Sin embargo, no vendría mal un repaso, el narrador cambia a primera persona alguna vez y es un poco confuso. Por lo demás, perfecto!!
Anonymous
9/23/17, 2:51 PM
This was amazing! Hope to see more like this from you :D
Anonymous
9/23/17, 2:38 PM
Excellent
HaraldDutch
9/23/17, 2:07 PM
The bwginning of the story, where rhe I-person wakes up shocked that he lies in the arms of a man, does not match the end, where he has accepted his faith
Bulk
9/23/17, 2:00 PM
Great premise!! More please!
Anonymous
9/23/17, 1:43 PM
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Happy Endings
9/23/17, 12:31 PM
Mike did not want to be Michael. Therefore, he did not stay Michael. Consent is everything. When I chose the name 'Happy Endings,' I meant it.
TimNJ
9/23/17, 12:18 PM
Really fascinating story! Please continue!
Bluemohawk
9/23/17, 12:07 PM
Great start. I love the oblivious aspect of your characters. Anxious to see where this goes...they have to leave the flat eventually...