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DMK
9/18/24, 5:17 AM
Love it ! 😍
9/18/24, 5:08 AM
It seems like there is some organization or company behind it. The man in surgical scrubs might just be one of the pawns or even also a subject waiting to be milk like the others. Can’t wait to see the next part!
SSSS
9/18/24, 4:37 AM
What in the AI...?
9/18/24, 3:47 AM
I was waiting for this!! And so many things happening here: Raymond just inserted himself into that family dynamic which was pretty hot. Adoptive father? Adopted Father? Anyways, he probably healed some trauma there. The magic from the neighbor's house is suspicious. Is that the previous owner, or are the new neighbors magic in some way? And the finally, stepbro. I haven't made up my mind on what to think of him, but regardless of that, I'm VERY excited for the next installment. Keep up the good work!
DMK
9/18/24, 3:32 AM
Oh yeah , the descriptive writing just class , the control & responsiveness is just awesome ! 👍🫸🫷
May 28, 2024
9/18/24, 2:55 AM
When can we get the next part
athleticleanmuscle
9/18/24, 2:28 AM
Excellent follow-up chapter! Very glad to hear you're working on chapter 4. I can't wait to read it!
9/18/24, 1:49 AM
please continue this
Leo
5/18/24, 8:36 PM
Please please continue writing more chapters! This is the hottest story I’ve read on this site in a long time!! I love everything about it!

5/19/24, 12:09 PM
@[Leo](/user/show/988646) That’s very kind of you! I have a couple of paths in mind to continue this one - we may be heading back to the frat house next.

Anonymous
9/18/24, 1:39 AM
@[tawdrytrance](/user/show/1086363) I would love to read more if you decide to continue this story! You're an excellent writer.
9/18/24, 1:18 AM
Great story so far! I missed the previous parts when it was first posted, but glad I caught up to it! Looking forward to find out what Dave has in mind for everyone down the road!