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Anonymous
9/20/17, 12:40 PM
Super hot! Not dark at all, just very erotic. One of your best.
Anonymous
9/20/17, 11:19 AM
Wow. Your stories make me cum so hard.
Sep 18, 2017
Anonymous
9/20/17, 10:58 AM
Anyone else slightly worried that consensual is a tag? Though I am glad a story like this exists. Great job.
Ragnarok
9/20/17, 9:04 AM
This was fantastic I just hope there is one more chapter at least. I really want to know what the slutty ass tattoo says. ;)
Anonymous
9/20/17, 7:31 AM
nice story. I'd love to see what you were picturing with jockboy Lin in your mind. Anyways thanks for that! If you're fielding the audience, I'd like to see a continuation of Jack and Lin + others but you do what you want!
Math_Reez
9/20/17, 6:51 AM
Hoy no subire nada mas, porque no me gusto el nivel de censura que aplique en este capitulo, y como para editar la historia se esconde hasta que vuelva a ser aprobada, decidi subir unas versiones editadas en un nuevo tumblr (donde subire mi historia que originalmente escribiria). Si les interesa leer las nuevas versiones aqui les dejo el link https://mathhypnostories.tumblr.com/ Prometo que a mas tardar el jueves o viernes subire los nuevos capitulos.
Anonymous
9/20/17, 5:15 AM
Finally something well written and original. More...please!
Math_Reez
9/20/17, 5:12 AM
Ese es el problema... igual el protagonista si puede ser mayor (aunque originalmente es de como 16) pero el otro si es su padre... asi que creo que no aplica...
ChaoticDjinn
9/20/17, 4:12 AM
I appreciate the feed back, sorry this last chapter didn't do it for you. However I should point out that Will didn't change Andy, he just ordered him to ACT like a top while fucking Ned. The "In a flash" might have been a poor choice of words, it wasn't a literal magical flash, just that Andy quickly started acting like he thought a top should. In the world rewrite at the end, when history is changed to reflect Uber's being dumb and in charge, it even mentions that Andy is a Boi and Ned is a Man, given their different garb; As well as Ned not liking Andy simply due to the fact that he(Andy) is a boi. Sorry if it was a bit unclear *.*'
Anonymous
9/20/17, 4:01 AM
Too short! Eager for the next chapter!