Recent Comments

Bluemohawk
9/19/17, 2:59 PM
Liked the story. The sex scenes were really hot. But...the ending left a bit to be desired. MC stories are my favorite genre, but I never understand how someone who is supposed to be friend could permanently and negatively alter his other friends. That said, you are a talented writer and I will gladly read anything you write!
Anonymous
9/19/17, 2:51 PM
Love your story, but where is kyle?
Anonymous
9/19/17, 12:49 PM
please keep this story going. hot damn
Anonymous
9/19/17, 9:37 AM
No offense but this ending seemed rushed and confusing. It didn't make sense that you had Will change Andy from the bottom Boi to a Top by just telling him to become one. You had the game do all the previous changes and then out of the blue Will could now rewrite Andy and change things himself. It just was confusing and didn't seem to follow your initial story. Sorry but I liked the other chapters way better and this final one was a big disappointment.
MalSkin
9/19/17, 9:22 AM
I am enjoying this story thanks
Anonymous
9/19/17, 9:16 AM
I LOVE this story it is so hot. Hope he makes the boys recruit other hot guys to fall into his spider web...
Anonymous
9/19/17, 7:00 AM
Incredible
Anonymous
9/19/17, 5:40 AM
Very Hot !!
Anonymous
9/19/17, 3:55 AM
Hope you continue this story line.
9/19/17, 3:48 AM
Thanks for the comments everyone. This was probably one of my favoritest commissions ever. I wouldn't mind exploring a prequel with Kirk, or maybe even a followup with the two jocks, perhaps even having them escape somehow. Or not lol. But I enjoyed writing this story and if it was too dark for you, well, i really don't know what to say, especially since half my stories have something dark in them anyways. In my opinion, there's nothing particularly lighthearted or happy about mind control anyways, so I find these comments rather puzzling. But oh well. Until next time!