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9/11/24, 7:20 AM
A great sexi hot story!!! Pushed all my kinky buttons. I too would have loved a bit more detail on the transformation. More depth to his dream, more focus on Will’s journey and his passage from straight to gay… but mostly I want more in general cause you are a great writer and we share the same fetishes. Do you have a Parteon? Do you write comission? You have in me a huge admirer!!! Beardfull1

9/12/24, 6:42 AM
@[Beardfull1](/user/show/363691) I don’t have anything where I accept money. Should I? I could really use some, but I’d feel guilty taking people’s money, even for a service! I am so happy though that you enjoyed my story! I have a series “Pledge” that you might enjoy, it has some hair growth and facial hair growth.

9/12/24, 7:38 AM
@[mustache](/user/show/10042040) There is no shame whatsoever in charging for good writing. I would love to comission a story from you!

9/12/24, 2:16 PM
@[Beardfull1](/user/show/363691) Okay! That sounds wonderful! Is there somewhere you’d like to discuss what you’d like?

9/17/24, 2:18 AM
@[mustache](/user/show/10042040) Mail me at beardfull1@yahoo.com
9/16/24, 11:14 PM
When rediscovering this story, I instantly remembered this chapter. This is probably my favorite. In my opinion, there are several factors that are really working for me here. It all comes down with the encounter between the officer and the recruits. 1. We are usually told to always obey and listen to law enforcement officers. And while the officer does give orders to the two recruits, I love how they are inwardly listening to the System's orders. The officer is completely unaware that these two men are obedient to a higher order. 2. I love the reversal of power in this encounter. At first, the police officer has all the power. He chose to pull their vehicle over under his authority. But within a matter of moments, he loses all authority and it's the lowly recruits that (under the guidance of the System) overpower the officer. No matter how much he tries to regain his authority, he is completely outmatched. 3. The ending cliffhanger. Now that we are nearing the story's conclusion, I remembered that I wanted to really amp up the excitement. We've witnessed Scott lose over and over again during his sparring sessions. And now that we return to them, and with the declaration from Hawk ... I really wanted to let the reader know that this is where we'll find out whether Scott's going to become a drone or not. So yeah ... this is definitely my favorite chapter.
Anonymous
9/16/24, 1:26 AM
Looking forward to the triple finale! I've grown accustomed to your clockwork Friday uploads for what must be coming up on close to a year now, which are always a highlight of the weekend. I hope the delay this week is simply because the work is three times as large and not because of any IRL issues causing you any grief. Best wishes and thank you for all the excellent writing you've shared over the months and years!

9/16/24, 12:54 PM
@Anonymous Hey! Thanks for the kind words. And no, nothing is wrong IRL. I just took a little break from writing over the last few weeks. Nothing serious, just a chance to recharge creatively after writing a lot over this past year. I have started 1 of the 3 endings, but since I want to publish all 3 pretty close to each other, it might be another week or 2 to get them all out together. And I’m working on a Halloween idea too…

Anonymous
9/16/24, 7:20 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Take your time and get the recharge you need! Whenever you're ready, I'll eagerly look forward to what you have in store. Your stories are always a treat and I'm sure they'll be worth the wait.

Anonymous
9/16/24, 9:42 PM
@Anonymous Same I agree!! Was confused on no friday upload but take your time!! I can't wait! This story finally had some good daddy bottoms with the coach. And hopefully the dad too :3
9/16/24, 8:54 PM
Awesome final chapter! Always enjoy your epilogues and climax moments

9/16/24, 8:56 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks… big fan of epilogues …as you can probably tell from my other stories.
9/16/24, 8:49 PM
Part 2 ?
9/16/24, 6:25 PM
i loved the twist and turns and shifts in power throughout this story. It would be interesting to experience the effects of that tea the Guru and Sanjay used to control and train their thralls. Normally i hate to see one who is totally immoral win in a situation like this. Personally i would have preferred to see the Guru ultimately suffer his total and ultimate downfall, losing his powers, his knowledge, and the mental ability to relearn any of it. Sab was intelligent and cunning enough to gain the most from this debacle, and proved he could be fair with others such as Tom and Max, who had found a deep and lasting happiness together. As bad-intentioned as Sanjay was in using Tom, to be fair he was doing it as the slave of the Guru. i thought he was treated badly in the end. I would hope that were future chapters to be written Sab would ultimately bring justice to the Guru, and while using his newfound powers Sab would work not only to live a good rich life for himself but to bring some good to others. Still, as a fictional work, i can settle for the evil guy winning occasionally. In some ways even this fictional result helps me to realize that i am not in charge of anything, and that while Men such as Sab are not perfect, i could easily learn to be his enthralled servant. Thanks to @Ashan for this lesson and the delightful entertainment along the way.
9/16/24, 5:06 PM
Oh, how I hate to see it end.

9/16/24, 5:18 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Aw thanks. Who knows what superhero may ‘cum, in the future.
9/16/24, 3:19 AM
Very hot start!

9/16/24, 4:58 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks!
9/16/24, 3:25 AM
Even hotter than the first part!

9/16/24, 4:58 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you like it!
Fox
9/16/24, 8:04 AM
Love this

9/16/24, 4:40 PM
@[Fox](/user/show/10025845) Thanks I'm having lots of fun writing it, it brings together two of my favourite things dom/sub kink and nurdy fantasy/Magic stories.