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9/18/24, 3:47 AM
I was waiting for this!! And so many things happening here: Raymond just inserted himself into that family dynamic which was pretty hot. Adoptive father? Adopted Father? Anyways, he probably healed some trauma there. The magic from the neighbor's house is suspicious. Is that the previous owner, or are the new neighbors magic in some way? And the finally, stepbro. I haven't made up my mind on what to think of him, but regardless of that, I'm VERY excited for the next installment. Keep up the good work!
DMK
9/18/24, 3:32 AM
Oh yeah , the descriptive writing just class , the control & responsiveness is just awesome ! 👍🫸🫷
May 28, 2024
9/18/24, 2:55 AM
When can we get the next part
athleticleanmuscle
9/18/24, 2:28 AM
Excellent follow-up chapter! Very glad to hear you're working on chapter 4. I can't wait to read it!
9/18/24, 1:49 AM
please continue this
Leo
5/18/24, 8:36 PM
Please please continue writing more chapters! This is the hottest story I’ve read on this site in a long time!! I love everything about it!

5/19/24, 12:09 PM
@[Leo](/user/show/988646) That’s very kind of you! I have a couple of paths in mind to continue this one - we may be heading back to the frat house next.

Anonymous
9/18/24, 1:39 AM
@[tawdrytrance](/user/show/1086363) I would love to read more if you decide to continue this story! You're an excellent writer.
9/18/24, 1:18 AM
Great story so far! I missed the previous parts when it was first posted, but glad I caught up to it! Looking forward to find out what Dave has in mind for everyone down the road!
9/18/24, 12:26 AM
Forgot to hit the publish button but should have another chapter coming in the next couple of days.
Number 1 Fan
9/17/24, 10:43 PM
The king has returned!!! This is genuinely one of the hottest stories on any erotica site and you continue to top yourself every time (no pun intended hehehe). Been a fan since the tumblr days and im so happy with the transition to longer form stories. You’re one of the only people who completely match my dumb (straight) jock fantasies and have inspired me to want to write with similar concepts. Every chapter gets me rock hard from the jump and i have to edge while reading to keep me from cumming too early. i cannot wait to see the adventures of Theo especially now that it seems he has an ally within the jocks who’s going out of their way to get his jock buddies to get “help” from Theo. Would love to see if maybe Billy could make an appearance somehow to discuss their mutual experiences with Jon and other jocks and to help each other with their respective harems? Maybe other jocks from other schools overhear Theos jocks talking about their experiences and rumors start to spread of a successful method for hung jocks and their constantly rock hard cocks? Just a suggestion but I KNOW you got some fun and horny storylines already in mind. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!
9/17/24, 10:28 PM
Hopefully another chapter is coming soon. Perfect story.