Recent Comments

9/16/24, 6:25 PM
i loved the twist and turns and shifts in power throughout this story. It would be interesting to experience the effects of that tea the Guru and Sanjay used to control and train their thralls. Normally i hate to see one who is totally immoral win in a situation like this. Personally i would have preferred to see the Guru ultimately suffer his total and ultimate downfall, losing his powers, his knowledge, and the mental ability to relearn any of it. Sab was intelligent and cunning enough to gain the most from this debacle, and proved he could be fair with others such as Tom and Max, who had found a deep and lasting happiness together. As bad-intentioned as Sanjay was in using Tom, to be fair he was doing it as the slave of the Guru. i thought he was treated badly in the end. I would hope that were future chapters to be written Sab would ultimately bring justice to the Guru, and while using his newfound powers Sab would work not only to live a good rich life for himself but to bring some good to others. Still, as a fictional work, i can settle for the evil guy winning occasionally. In some ways even this fictional result helps me to realize that i am not in charge of anything, and that while Men such as Sab are not perfect, i could easily learn to be his enthralled servant. Thanks to @Ashan for this lesson and the delightful entertainment along the way.
9/16/24, 5:06 PM
Oh, how I hate to see it end.

9/16/24, 5:18 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Aw thanks. Who knows what superhero may ‘cum, in the future.
9/16/24, 3:19 AM
Very hot start!

9/16/24, 4:58 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks!
9/16/24, 3:25 AM
Even hotter than the first part!

9/16/24, 4:58 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you like it!
Fox
9/16/24, 8:04 AM
Love this

9/16/24, 4:40 PM
@[Fox](/user/show/10025845) Thanks I'm having lots of fun writing it, it brings together two of my favourite things dom/sub kink and nurdy fantasy/Magic stories.
Alex
9/16/24, 3:34 PM
Love it. Its so hot!
9/16/24, 2:00 PM
Very funny!
hairyartist
9/16/24, 1:45 PM
still the best series, thank you!
Jay
9/16/24, 1:13 PM
@GoodBoyPuppy Would love to see Dean start testing his pheromones on other men. Such as coach's, cops, his boss at work etc. Love the power exchange of a younger top using someone older who would normally be in charge.
9/16/24, 1:02 PM
Thanks for the comments! I received a lot of emails and encouragement to write more and I still may do but I unfortunately decided not to at the moment as I am not a writer and it takes a lot of time and effort for me to get another chapter done. This was my first ever writing project and I challenged myself to complete it. I also kind of already finished the story in my head and moved on to other story ideas. I do have some of it written down as well as a ton of notes, and I did think it was interesting enough to worth the effort because I've tried to escalate the situation while keeping it realistic and uncontrived all the way but due to that especially it takes a lot of words to move things along. But, anyhow, if I get less busy with my current projects I will definitely try my hand at writing again either on the second chapter or another (similar) story.