Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/15/17, 9:52 PM
I can see the new rule is there to protect the site and site owner from being prosecuted, but I'm sure no law in any community permits sexing a person without his/her consent, but here we have an entire site dedicating to it, how is that "morally" or "lawfully" more acceptable? This is fantasy entertainment and nothing more, we can enjoy it in our head without actually doing it. Besides, being a high school athlete I saw plenty of exploration and sexualized behaviors between boys, some jests some serious, all too willing. Honestly, the number 18 is hardly set to accommodate human hormone, so the limitation is rather comical when kids at 15+ are already sex-craved without any MC, not to mention age has nothing to do with maturity. (Justin Bieber comes to mind) I see no wrong in involving high school kids in MC stories.
Anonymous
9/15/17, 6:00 PM
The story was fine, but those bars all throughout, (~~~~) really screwed up the formatting. Usually, that kind of dashed row can represent a break, like time passing, or a chapter, but here they just got in the way. They also had varying lengths, to what end? Eventually, they got so long that they forced to wrap and take up multiple lines for no reason.
PapaUrsus
9/15/17, 5:52 PM
Thank you all. I will definitely continue.
Axel R.
9/15/17, 5:25 PM
Great start! I'm assuming Colin was actually straight and then his dad changed him? Can't wait to see how it all pans out and what Mister Banner has in store for them. Will he have his son look at Esrel diffrently or treat him diffrently? Will he tweak Esrel's personality? Looking forward to whatever you write!
9/15/17, 5:12 PM
Please continue!
Anonymous
9/15/17, 4:51 PM
Interesting premise! Good start!
Aug 4, 2017
Anonymous
9/15/17, 3:39 PM
Would love to see him permanently swap bodies withcody but slowly revert back to being gay at first being disgusted but then embracing it.
Anonymous
9/15/17, 1:25 PM
achingly hot...
9/15/17, 12:53 PM
Exactly my cup of tea! Love to read where this is going to...
Anonymous
9/15/17, 12:17 PM
I love where this is going! More, please! I want to see what happens!