Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/15/17, 6:00 PM
The story was fine, but those bars all throughout, (~~~~) really screwed up the formatting. Usually, that kind of dashed row can represent a break, like time passing, or a chapter, but here they just got in the way. They also had varying lengths, to what end? Eventually, they got so long that they forced to wrap and take up multiple lines for no reason.
PapaUrsus
9/15/17, 5:52 PM
Thank you all. I will definitely continue.
Axel R.
9/15/17, 5:25 PM
Great start! I'm assuming Colin was actually straight and then his dad changed him? Can't wait to see how it all pans out and what Mister Banner has in store for them. Will he have his son look at Esrel diffrently or treat him diffrently? Will he tweak Esrel's personality? Looking forward to whatever you write!
9/15/17, 5:12 PM
Please continue!
Anonymous
9/15/17, 4:51 PM
Interesting premise! Good start!
Aug 4, 2017
Anonymous
9/15/17, 3:39 PM
Would love to see him permanently swap bodies withcody but slowly revert back to being gay at first being disgusted but then embracing it.
Anonymous
9/15/17, 1:25 PM
achingly hot...
9/15/17, 12:53 PM
Exactly my cup of tea! Love to read where this is going to...
Anonymous
9/15/17, 12:17 PM
I love where this is going! More, please! I want to see what happens!
Ursocub
9/15/17, 10:40 AM
Please continue with this story!!