Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/16/17, 3:57 AM
never ceases to amaze. glad someone posted in the comments about the welsh. it bothers me when its not obvious what the translation comes from. I'd've taken forever trying to crack a code
Anonymous
9/16/17, 3:54 AM
hawt hawt hawt
Anonymous
9/16/17, 2:46 AM
This was a great addition! But I'd also love it if you went back and fleshed out how the rest of the crew got assimilated before moving the story to earth. I'm along for the ride either way, though. :)
Anonymous
9/16/17, 1:19 AM
Hi! When we'll se the next part? I'm dying to know what happens next!!!
tul
9/15/17, 11:43 PM
So hot! Best I've read in a while. Please keep writing! :)
Secret
9/15/17, 10:26 PM
Dearly notes, I'll settle down on ~~~'s I was just trying to sort of display my characters level of trance as he progressed through the story. I'll attempt an edit.
Donkbutt
9/15/17, 9:55 PM
I'm concerned that the site changes are just implemented, no discussion, and somewhat arbitrary. Hugh is very quiet on all topics.
Anonymous
9/15/17, 9:52 PM
I can see the new rule is there to protect the site and site owner from being prosecuted, but I'm sure no law in any community permits sexing a person without his/her consent, but here we have an entire site dedicating to it, how is that "morally" or "lawfully" more acceptable? This is fantasy entertainment and nothing more, we can enjoy it in our head without actually doing it. Besides, being a high school athlete I saw plenty of exploration and sexualized behaviors between boys, some jests some serious, all too willing. Honestly, the number 18 is hardly set to accommodate human hormone, so the limitation is rather comical when kids at 15+ are already sex-craved without any MC, not to mention age has nothing to do with maturity. (Justin Bieber comes to mind) I see no wrong in involving high school kids in MC stories.
Anonymous
9/15/17, 6:00 PM
The story was fine, but those bars all throughout, (~~~~) really screwed up the formatting. Usually, that kind of dashed row can represent a break, like time passing, or a chapter, but here they just got in the way. They also had varying lengths, to what end? Eventually, they got so long that they forced to wrap and take up multiple lines for no reason.
PapaUrsus
9/15/17, 5:52 PM
Thank you all. I will definitely continue.