This is fantastic! I love the characters and the set-up. The foot action is great and much appreciated. Really good writing!

I absolutely agree with the opinion above. Great story and great writing. Thank u!

omg Omg OMG Holy crap these 4 stories were AMAZING! These stories aren't even my normal interest but I was curious. This was an incredible emotional roller coaster for me. At first it was like, "aw man, yet another story of someone's lives being ruined just because someone else feels that their life is so pathetic that they need to ruin someone else's life for their own fantasy and amusement." And then it was, "wow, holy crap, he chose to actually improve the other person's life after the fun? MORE OF THIS PLEASE!!!!" And then it was, "wait, what? are we really going down this road again?" And then, "Yup...we're really going down this road again...why am i still reading this? Maybe it'll end like the first one?" And finally, "oh WOW! holy crap talk about a twist! And one I can really get behind! While i'm not a fan of having things happen blindly, I love the ending where the 'victim' gets to be empowered and choose how he wants to be, when he wants to be, and where he wants to be it. Why can't there be more stories like this?" Far too often I have read an incredible first story of a series originally intended to be a one off (or even a short series of stories) and have been blown away by how well written and well-contained it was...Only to be further let down that the author fully listened to their audience and continued it on for many more parts to satisfy them and not the author. Seriously. This 4-part story arc is perfect on its own. You took the Kyle story full circle and the Jack story full circle. Even Lin, the third character introduced at the end of the first story to show that the first story had a happy ending, even he got a full circle, even BETTER than Kyle's story. Seriously, write what *you* want to write about, how you want it, and when you want. That is the advice and guiding force of every great author out there. If you want to broaden or continue this story, go ahead. If you want to go to something else, absolutely go ahead. If you want some ideas on themes, yeah, sure, go ahead and ask for some input, but please don't let someone tell you, "I love these character! I want to see them do this and this and this and this and...or...I love these characters! I want to see this one in whatever situation, or whatever." If people want to see one or more characters in a future story, and you want to do that, go nuts man! But write it how YOU want to write it.

You are by far, my favorite author on this site. Reading your stories especially with the sonic pen gets me hard. You definitely need to submit your stories to My Friend's Feet website. Would love to see them make a video using your time freeze concept. Looking forward to the next story about these two mormons. Maybe you can have Ben come by after his morning jog, would be so hot to lick and suck all that Ben man sweat off his feet, and body, let the mormon boys play too with Ben. Be a menajois twa foot dream.

Gawd so hot. Want to see more of dissss

I disagree with the previous comment. I think this particular story was ended perfectly and could stand on its own very well without additional chapters (though I know there are some). It was very well written and had just enough tension that kept you on the edge of "aw man, not another life-ruining hypno story" and "well...what does he do next?"

Please continue jockboy themes, they are intensely hot.

This is so good! Hope you continue it someday!

I'd be interested in seeing some things done to Jack, and I really enjoyed you take on the jockboy theme, but I'm keen for whatever you decide to write, it is up to you after all :)

Enjoyed it a lot, wish u return to this one sometime