Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/14/17, 2:49 AM
That was one hot piece of writing! I am dripping in MY chastity cage!!!
9/14/17, 2:24 AM
Thanks guys, part two will be coming soon. Hope you enjoy it!
9/14/17, 2:24 AM
Thanks for the nice comments everyone! Really appreciate it :) @Swizzington--you're right, they probably don't lmao. I think i tend to do this a lot, so it's nice to point that out. I'll consider not overusing that line in the future. To the last commenter--I've actually posted on My Friends Feet before and someone even asked permission to post some of my older works there. It didn't go that well lol. Mind control doesn't fare too well over there it seems. On another note, you seemed to have read my mind, as a reunion with Ben and the Missionaries was already in the cards :) Just have to finish some other projects first.
Anonymous
9/14/17, 12:55 AM
I think the 18+ matches all material that has a sexual nature and "adult" content. All characters in porn or adult material must be over 18 so it makes sense here too.
Rupert Simon
9/13/17, 9:21 PM
I love this concept! Great story! I would love to see more foot stuff and bringing Richard in will only make it hotter. Maybe Louis could discover sam is ticklish and use that knowledge to regain the upper hand, making Sam a tickle slave with his big bare feet the source of humiliation.
Rupert
9/13/17, 9:12 PM
This is fantastic! I love the characters and the set-up. The foot action is great and much appreciated. Really good writing!
Anonymous
9/13/17, 6:49 PM
I absolutely agree with the opinion above. Great story and great writing. Thank u!
Anonymous
9/13/17, 3:56 PM
omg Omg OMG Holy crap these 4 stories were AMAZING! These stories aren't even my normal interest but I was curious. This was an incredible emotional roller coaster for me. At first it was like, "aw man, yet another story of someone's lives being ruined just because someone else feels that their life is so pathetic that they need to ruin someone else's life for their own fantasy and amusement." And then it was, "wow, holy crap, he chose to actually improve the other person's life after the fun? MORE OF THIS PLEASE!!!!" And then it was, "wait, what? are we really going down this road again?" And then, "Yup...we're really going down this road again...why am i still reading this? Maybe it'll end like the first one?" And finally, "oh WOW! holy crap talk about a twist! And one I can really get behind! While i'm not a fan of having things happen blindly, I love the ending where the 'victim' gets to be empowered and choose how he wants to be, when he wants to be, and where he wants to be it. Why can't there be more stories like this?" Far too often I have read an incredible first story of a series originally intended to be a one off (or even a short series of stories) and have been blown away by how well written and well-contained it was...Only to be further let down that the author fully listened to their audience and continued it on for many more parts to satisfy them and not the author. Seriously. This 4-part story arc is perfect on its own. You took the Kyle story full circle and the Jack story full circle. Even Lin, the third character introduced at the end of the first story to show that the first story had a happy ending, even he got a full circle, even BETTER than Kyle's story. Seriously, write what *you* want to write about, how you want it, and when you want. That is the advice and guiding force of every great author out there. If you want to broaden or continue this story, go ahead. If you want to go to something else, absolutely go ahead. If you want some ideas on themes, yeah, sure, go ahead and ask for some input, but please don't let someone tell you, "I love these character! I want to see them do this and this and this and this and...or...I love these characters! I want to see this one in whatever situation, or whatever." If people want to see one or more characters in a future story, and you want to do that, go nuts man! But write it how YOU want to write it.
Anonymous
9/13/17, 3:34 PM
You are by far, my favorite author on this site. Reading your stories especially with the sonic pen gets me hard. You definitely need to submit your stories to My Friend's Feet website. Would love to see them make a video using your time freeze concept. Looking forward to the next story about these two mormons. Maybe you can have Ben come by after his morning jog, would be so hot to lick and suck all that Ben man sweat off his feet, and body, let the mormon boys play too with Ben. Be a menajois twa foot dream.
Anonymous
9/13/17, 2:11 PM
Gawd so hot. Want to see more of dissss