Recent Comments

Alex
9/16/24, 3:34 PM
Love it. Its so hot!
9/16/24, 2:00 PM
Very funny!
hairyartist
9/16/24, 1:45 PM
still the best series, thank you!
Jay
9/16/24, 1:13 PM
@GoodBoyPuppy Would love to see Dean start testing his pheromones on other men. Such as coach's, cops, his boss at work etc. Love the power exchange of a younger top using someone older who would normally be in charge.
9/16/24, 1:02 PM
Thanks for the comments! I received a lot of emails and encouragement to write more and I still may do but I unfortunately decided not to at the moment as I am not a writer and it takes a lot of time and effort for me to get another chapter done. This was my first ever writing project and I challenged myself to complete it. I also kind of already finished the story in my head and moved on to other story ideas. I do have some of it written down as well as a ton of notes, and I did think it was interesting enough to worth the effort because I've tried to escalate the situation while keeping it realistic and uncontrived all the way but due to that especially it takes a lot of words to move things along. But, anyhow, if I get less busy with my current projects I will definitely try my hand at writing again either on the second chapter or another (similar) story.
9/16/24, 12:57 PM
Dom son introducing his sub dad to some of his teammates would be very hot. Might also be hot if in the course of all that, some of his Dom teammates realize that their Coach is another hungry sub. Could be quite the locker room orgy after a sweaty hard-fought win on the field. BTW, this story was HOT.
9/16/24, 7:39 AM
Relatively simple story line and minimal description, well written and easy to read, but it somehow created a vivid picture of the dungeon, the eager new pups, and the making of another of Daddy's regular boys. There was a definite feeling of power and magic in the air. Typically i prefer forms of domination and control less in the magical or supernatural realm, and more down to earth. In this case though the method didn't matter so much as Daddy's penalties and the emotional reactions of Daddy's victims, and those were palpable.
9/14/24, 9:34 PM
I’ve been thinking of it since I read it today and it’s good but it’s not, i want it changed but it would probably ruin the story, I liked Collin turning into a demon but not him cease to exist, if there is a way to make two alternate stories of it I would definitely be happy with one happy ending and one really horny ending and this reality horny ending since I know it’s going down there anyway but at least you can have those options I hope you can use if you have more ideas or plot for it. I realized if something really mind blowing happens to the reality and collapses would you do the story again but halfway for the demons so but they corrupt someone else instead of that chapter like commander Leon instead of William for example? I don’t know maybe I’m getting ahead of my self.

Pcm
9/15/24, 3:21 AM
@[gayfantasylover](/user/show/10013980) I always intend for this series to be a community series, and I am certianly interestes in creating alternate endings or events! Howeer, i would like to complete the canon story in the canon timeline first, and maybe I would revisit alternate fate of the characters. Also, did Collin really cease to exist here? He is still there, isn't he? His soul is the same.

Anonymous
9/15/24, 4:23 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Yeah, but his soul has been completely surrendered to pleasure, and become a slave to it. So in other words, his soul is still there, but this is worst version of him after his transformation.

9/15/24, 6:35 AM
@[gayfantasylover](/user/show/10013980) I am planning a what if scenario, with dragons, and a midquel

Anonymous
9/15/24, 4:34 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Ok so could we get more chapters of the overlord like a prequel chapter or something to know him more and his origin if he was born a true demon or was made as one? And of the infernal realm of all different sexy horny demons.

Pcm
9/16/24, 3:54 AM
@Anonymous Of course the nauture of Collin's identity is ambiguous. Like you said, it's still him, but the worst version of whom he could be. @darkblade2814 I look forward to reading it! @Anonymous I do have prequels planned... At least one where Gregory was turned, though I don't know when I would write it. I think it's better for the overlord's past to remain mysterious and ambiguous for now.

Anonymous
9/16/24, 4:29 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Can I ask what you mean by Midquel?
9/16/24, 4:22 AM
Similar to Heru Kane’s comment, I want to read the play time between the two before others are brought in.
9/16/24, 3:59 AM
Absolutely fucking amazing bro! Man what a ride! So much continued transformational sex which keeps going.