Recent Comments

9/12/17, 4:45 PM
Great Story! I'm glad Lin didn't stay permanently dumbed down although that aspect was hot.The ending was super. Lin gets what he wants and he has Jack as well who has him.
Sep 7, 2017
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9/12/17, 2:29 PM
Loved it!
Anonymous
9/12/17, 2:13 PM
Honestly the best story I've read so far. The development of the characters, how you displayed their thought processes, and the climax and resolution made it fantastic. Lin's volition made the story all the more better. I hope that you continue writing!
Anonymous
9/12/17, 1:35 PM
Great job! Thanks so much. What about a story were Kyle try to look for Jack wanting to become a Jock boy? I think first story doesn't have an enough happy ending :-)
JamieTi684
9/12/17, 10:47 AM
:D I love it! This was a great story H.E., we're all looking forward to more!
Anonymous
9/12/17, 10:04 AM
Really really hope you finish this series. It's one of my favourites and it takes a lot to impress me.
Anonymous
9/12/17, 5:37 AM
Very nice work! Loved the ending.
Anonymous
9/12/17, 5:05 AM
Honestly, this story holds up well on its own without the sex. You have excellent character development, great insight into the character's mind, and a beautiful transition. It was very well done, and I applaud you for it. I prefer to skip the sex, myself, and did so here, but I love a good hypnosis conversion.
Anonymous
9/12/17, 4:17 AM
Great way to make it a happy ending. We still enjoyed a dumbing down : )
Nnnrg
9/12/17, 2:49 AM
The rule is for father/dependent son. So if a father and son incest scene happens, it can't be a dependent. Normally that's someone who's under 18, but also for other adults. I imagine it's to get rid of the spectre of child abuse.