Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/10/17, 10:57 PM
The alien language looks like welsh :) Well done! Hope his transformation continues.
Happy Endings
9/10/17, 10:26 PM
I promise I'm not betraying my namesake guys :) . Next chapter will be the last one for Lin's story, and I hope I do a good job explaining everything.
Anonymous
9/10/17, 9:24 PM
awesome, great job. Love Lin's eye fixation training and mindlessly repeating hypno mantras. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 9:12 PM
I really want to see where you take this. Hope this is not a one shot story. This is really good! :-)
Anonymous
9/10/17, 9:04 PM
It's never willing. Jack is slowing modifying Lin, from anxious dweeb to study sex toy.
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:58 PM
I'm excited for this story. Really enjoying the development so far!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:57 PM
The writer spends time and effort crafting a story and you assholes are quibbling over blond and blonde. Really? I think the writer would prefer comments on the quality of the story. WC, nice start. Would like to see where this goes. I'll keep reading to what happens to the 'blondes'!!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:55 PM
Don't take this the wrong way -- fuck the Canadians!!!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:21 PM
Admittedly, there is one slight flaw I noticed in the overall story from the first chapter. In that one, Jack had said said he'd posted a craigslist ad for a willing transformation, yet you seemed to show it as only a modification of undesirable behavior when you showed the actual ad from Lin's perspective. Isn't that technically not truly willing, since he didn't know what he was agreeing to in its totality to become a dumb jock bro? That being said, your writing is exquisite, and the character development is very solid. Keep up the awesome work. I look forward to seeing his next steps in his conversion.
Anonymous
9/10/17, 6:19 PM
I know...right..!!??