Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/10/17, 9:24 PM
awesome, great job. Love Lin's eye fixation training and mindlessly repeating hypno mantras. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 9:12 PM
I really want to see where you take this. Hope this is not a one shot story. This is really good! :-)
Anonymous
9/10/17, 9:04 PM
It's never willing. Jack is slowing modifying Lin, from anxious dweeb to study sex toy.
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:58 PM
I'm excited for this story. Really enjoying the development so far!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:57 PM
The writer spends time and effort crafting a story and you assholes are quibbling over blond and blonde. Really? I think the writer would prefer comments on the quality of the story. WC, nice start. Would like to see where this goes. I'll keep reading to what happens to the 'blondes'!!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:55 PM
Don't take this the wrong way -- fuck the Canadians!!!
Anonymous
9/10/17, 8:21 PM
Admittedly, there is one slight flaw I noticed in the overall story from the first chapter. In that one, Jack had said said he'd posted a craigslist ad for a willing transformation, yet you seemed to show it as only a modification of undesirable behavior when you showed the actual ad from Lin's perspective. Isn't that technically not truly willing, since he didn't know what he was agreeing to in its totality to become a dumb jock bro? That being said, your writing is exquisite, and the character development is very solid. Keep up the awesome work. I look forward to seeing his next steps in his conversion.
Anonymous
9/10/17, 6:19 PM
I know...right..!!??
Anonymous
9/10/17, 6:11 PM
Very nicely done so far. Slow, subtle, a good conversion. Granted, it seems Lin is a bit more receptive than most subjects. From what I understand, it usually takes quite some time for a subject to truly experience any major changes in behavior. That being said, I love the thought processes so far, and the way you balance the changes with the progress. It'll be interesting to see him bulking up and getting swole. :P
tomozco
9/10/17, 5:57 PM
Thanks for your comment, jeffpetier@yahoo.com! I'm currently giving this series a bit of a break to give myself some time to recharge some new ideas and inspirations to continue. I have some ideas in mind, but still need to think out some proper plots to put them down to writing. In terms of the past characters, I haven't forgotten about them, but haven't really thought about any specific plots to include them again, but it's a nice suggestion. I'll see if there's anywhere anyone of them could fit in smoothly....but if not, in any case, they should all be given mention again in a "grand finale" that I've conceptualized already...Stay tuned! ;)