Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/10/17, 6:11 PM
Very nicely done so far. Slow, subtle, a good conversion. Granted, it seems Lin is a bit more receptive than most subjects. From what I understand, it usually takes quite some time for a subject to truly experience any major changes in behavior. That being said, I love the thought processes so far, and the way you balance the changes with the progress. It'll be interesting to see him bulking up and getting swole. :P
tomozco
9/10/17, 5:57 PM
Thanks for your comment, jeffpetier@yahoo.com! I'm currently giving this series a bit of a break to give myself some time to recharge some new ideas and inspirations to continue. I have some ideas in mind, but still need to think out some proper plots to put them down to writing. In terms of the past characters, I haven't forgotten about them, but haven't really thought about any specific plots to include them again, but it's a nice suggestion. I'll see if there's anywhere anyone of them could fit in smoothly....but if not, in any case, they should all be given mention again in a "grand finale" that I've conceptualized already...Stay tuned! ;)
Anonymous
9/10/17, 3:26 PM
More of the demon possession please! Love the endig that i didnt see coming. Shouldve read the tags haha
9/10/17, 2:03 PM
I love demon possession! Very good scene at the end! Maybe there should be a follow-up chapter showing how the demon takes possession of Chris.
jeffpetier@yahoo.com
9/10/17, 1:52 PM
Great story I love the detail in each of the chapters. Are we ever going to go back to previously captured slaves and see any new changes or new sex scenes between the guys? I would personally love to see one with all the statnons and either Pablo or Roberto .
Anonymous
9/10/17, 1:46 PM
One of my favorite stories.. Please don't stop
Anonymous
9/10/17, 11:51 AM
The story was hot, but the lack of punctuation and grammar, as well as heaps of errors made it a chore to read.
Dave
9/10/17, 11:28 AM
What a strange feeling, I swear at times I wished and felt I was Jesse and wishing I was. I am straight butt my god I felt it!
rofous
9/10/17, 10:45 AM
this story totally my thing . massage . nipple. hypnosis revenge on tist . wow . i cum so hard
Anonymous
9/10/17, 9:18 AM
Awesome setup! Time for Lin to grow and submit!