Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/9/17, 7:56 PM
Loving this! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
9/9/17, 7:37 PM
Wow, it's great to see you writing again. The style was definitely not what I expected, but you pulled it off in a really creepy-elegant way, and the whole story was intriguing. Dumbing down and broing out is hot no matter how you approach things. It's always fun to see a writer you love experimenting with their craft. Thanks.
Anonymous
9/9/17, 7:14 PM
Another awesome story (it's new to me)! Your writing style and approach to transformations always make me wish there was more.
Anonymous
9/9/17, 4:53 PM
Awesome, excited to see an Asian jockboy go under. Wonder what's going to happen to him in the next chapter- addiction to spirals/pendulums, obedience training, jockboy dildo squats? Looking forward to it ;)
Anonymous
9/9/17, 4:23 PM
I love twist and turns stories. Well written. I never expected Sven until the end. That's good writing! Imagery was also creative. And, the sex was hot.
9/9/17, 2:52 PM
Hot story, with some great writing. The descriptions of the magic alley in particular gave it a really eerie, surreal feeling.
Meatbox
9/9/17, 12:31 PM
What about turning Gym Rat into a muscle slave
Anonymous
9/9/17, 11:56 AM
Great start, like your writing style. Glad to see you're continuing with the story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
9/9/17, 11:21 AM
(bought either as servants, pets or livestock for royal herds)
Anonymous
9/9/17, 11:18 AM
Medieval kingdom with slave markets filled to the brim with merchandise (preferably hairy) that must perform for potential aristocratic buyers