Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/8/17, 8:56 PM
Awesome work
Sep 7, 2017
Anonymous
9/8/17, 8:01 PM
This is a great story dude. I love the narrator's style; he's a very relatable person and definitely made me chuckle a few times as I read it. Comedy+sex is a winning combination. Also, as a bisexual man, I was even more turned on by the fact a girl was involved and making it happen. A lot of people here complain at the slightest flash of titties, but I love to see some bisexual erotica too. If there's some kind of russian conspiracy turning straight guys gay, I'd love to get to the bottom of it. I hope you continue writing in this world.
9/8/17, 7:56 PM
Just so everyone knows, I'm going to redo the ending slightly. Hard to believe but I wasn't satisfied with Alex's fusion. I think he submitted a little too easily. It's getting a little addition soon.
Swizzington
9/8/17, 7:07 PM
This is an interesting premise! I enjoyed it. That language reminds me of Welsh. :-) I have a very minor thing to add, if you're interested. When describing a man, it's blond. Blonde is for females (I make this mistake all the time).
Sep 7, 2017
JamieTi684
9/8/17, 5:31 PM
Hot!
Anonymous
9/8/17, 3:05 PM
I loved it. I'm interested in how this ESU plays out.
Jake
9/8/17, 2:11 PM
God I really love this series! A great surprise that the world domination plans were nearly thwarted, but so amazingly erotic when the resisting human finally submits during his orgasm. More please!
9/8/17, 10:22 AM
Well written, good and, at the end, a nice, almost bittersweet touch.
Anonymous
9/8/17, 9:27 AM
I'd like to see a business office of some kind, or a school. Something exclusive to the very intelligent and over achievers.
Anonymous
9/8/17, 9:21 AM
Can I say the above prompt, but make it a pair of identical twin jocks turned into their twink masters sex slaves? With both of them intelligent so they're useful sex slaves?