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9/16/24, 12:57 PM
Dom son introducing his sub dad to some of his teammates would be very hot. Might also be hot if in the course of all that, some of his Dom teammates realize that their Coach is another hungry sub. Could be quite the locker room orgy after a sweaty hard-fought win on the field. BTW, this story was HOT.
9/16/24, 7:39 AM
Relatively simple story line and minimal description, well written and easy to read, but it somehow created a vivid picture of the dungeon, the eager new pups, and the making of another of Daddy's regular boys. There was a definite feeling of power and magic in the air. Typically i prefer forms of domination and control less in the magical or supernatural realm, and more down to earth. In this case though the method didn't matter so much as Daddy's penalties and the emotional reactions of Daddy's victims, and those were palpable.
9/14/24, 9:34 PM
I’ve been thinking of it since I read it today and it’s good but it’s not, i want it changed but it would probably ruin the story, I liked Collin turning into a demon but not him cease to exist, if there is a way to make two alternate stories of it I would definitely be happy with one happy ending and one really horny ending and this reality horny ending since I know it’s going down there anyway but at least you can have those options I hope you can use if you have more ideas or plot for it. I realized if something really mind blowing happens to the reality and collapses would you do the story again but halfway for the demons so but they corrupt someone else instead of that chapter like commander Leon instead of William for example? I don’t know maybe I’m getting ahead of my self.

Pcm
9/15/24, 3:21 AM
@[gayfantasylover](/user/show/10013980) I always intend for this series to be a community series, and I am certianly interestes in creating alternate endings or events! Howeer, i would like to complete the canon story in the canon timeline first, and maybe I would revisit alternate fate of the characters. Also, did Collin really cease to exist here? He is still there, isn't he? His soul is the same.

Anonymous
9/15/24, 4:23 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Yeah, but his soul has been completely surrendered to pleasure, and become a slave to it. So in other words, his soul is still there, but this is worst version of him after his transformation.

9/15/24, 6:35 AM
@[gayfantasylover](/user/show/10013980) I am planning a what if scenario, with dragons, and a midquel

Anonymous
9/15/24, 4:34 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Ok so could we get more chapters of the overlord like a prequel chapter or something to know him more and his origin if he was born a true demon or was made as one? And of the infernal realm of all different sexy horny demons.

Pcm
9/16/24, 3:54 AM
@Anonymous Of course the nauture of Collin's identity is ambiguous. Like you said, it's still him, but the worst version of whom he could be. @darkblade2814 I look forward to reading it! @Anonymous I do have prequels planned... At least one where Gregory was turned, though I don't know when I would write it. I think it's better for the overlord's past to remain mysterious and ambiguous for now.

Anonymous
9/16/24, 4:29 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Can I ask what you mean by Midquel?
9/16/24, 4:22 AM
Similar to Heru Kane’s comment, I want to read the play time between the two before others are brought in.
9/16/24, 3:59 AM
Absolutely fucking amazing bro! Man what a ride! So much continued transformational sex which keeps going.
7/18/24, 9:19 PM
The ideas were really fun and the sex scene are hot... but the overall execution wasn't the best. Was confused a bit, hopefully part 2 makes it easier to understand.

9/16/24, 3:54 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Sorry for the reaallllllyyy late reply 😓 Admittedly, the execution could’ve been better but I tanked it a bit. I was in a slump and wanted to let off some steam with some comedy… that’s probably why it reads a bit jumbled. For the most part, I wanted to write some lore (and by extension have an excuse to world build and poke fun at myself). I wasn’t sure if I would continue with this one so I did story beats out of order. Thinking back on it, it would’ve been best to start with the usual introduction then get some steam going. I’m on a writing break as of now but that may change closer towards Halloween. I have drafts for another story I’d written before my break that relates to this one (plus another story that I’ve already written) so I’ll have to see if I can get the motivation to finish this before then. Also, thanks for the constructive criticism! If/when I write a part 2, it’ll hopefully clear some stuff up.
9/15/24, 6:07 PM
Thank you for another hot chapter! It's always hot to see Kyle craving the size even with him being so big as it's never enough. Though with the results obvious for Kyle I'm curious if we will see Conners new attitude as well. He was always comfortable infront of Kyle but will he be able to hold a conversation with other men? Even being bold to ask for things he wants from them? Can't wait to see more chapters and how much Kyle takes. Seeing him grow even more confident with his bigger cock, having Conner say he wants him to take his size and have them compare when he was bigger was all so hot to read!

9/16/24, 3:23 AM
@[Frznsl566](/user/show/962533) You'll definitely see Conner's new confidence in the next couple of chapters.
8/23/24, 4:54 AM
I do have a chapter in the works too everyone that has asked

Anonymous
9/16/24, 3:14 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) I am very excited to read your next chapter
9/16/24, 1:42 AM
This was such a fun story to read, hope that there's a sequel where both Dahlia and Norman get their happy ending :3
9/16/24, 1:04 AM
I keep coming back to this story since it was first published. Edlam, please consider continuing this amazingly sexy story.