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Anonymous
9/8/17, 9:25 PM
Swizz -- According to the Oxford Living DIctionary "Usage The alternative spellings blonde and blond correspond to the feminine and masculine forms in French, but in English the distinction is not always made, as English does not have such distinctions of grammatical gender. Thus, blond woman or blonde woman, blond man or blonde man are all used. The word is more commonly used of women, though, and in the noun the spelling is typically blonde. In American usage the usual spelling is blond for both adjective and noun." Apparently, it's not a mistake.
Anonymous
9/8/17, 8:56 PM
Awesome work
Sep 7, 2017
Anonymous
9/8/17, 8:01 PM
This is a great story dude. I love the narrator's style; he's a very relatable person and definitely made me chuckle a few times as I read it. Comedy+sex is a winning combination. Also, as a bisexual man, I was even more turned on by the fact a girl was involved and making it happen. A lot of people here complain at the slightest flash of titties, but I love to see some bisexual erotica too. If there's some kind of russian conspiracy turning straight guys gay, I'd love to get to the bottom of it. I hope you continue writing in this world.
9/8/17, 7:56 PM
Just so everyone knows, I'm going to redo the ending slightly. Hard to believe but I wasn't satisfied with Alex's fusion. I think he submitted a little too easily. It's getting a little addition soon.
Swizzington
9/8/17, 7:07 PM
This is an interesting premise! I enjoyed it. That language reminds me of Welsh. :-) I have a very minor thing to add, if you're interested. When describing a man, it's blond. Blonde is for females (I make this mistake all the time).
Sep 7, 2017
JamieTi684
9/8/17, 5:31 PM
Hot!
Anonymous
9/8/17, 3:05 PM
I loved it. I'm interested in how this ESU plays out.
Jake
9/8/17, 2:11 PM
God I really love this series! A great surprise that the world domination plans were nearly thwarted, but so amazingly erotic when the resisting human finally submits during his orgasm. More please!
9/8/17, 10:22 AM
Well written, good and, at the end, a nice, almost bittersweet touch.
Anonymous
9/8/17, 9:27 AM
I'd like to see a business office of some kind, or a school. Something exclusive to the very intelligent and over achievers.