Recent Comments

Erin
9/7/17, 3:30 AM
Collage or of age boarding school. A place people got into by merit, one way or another, this is a pace you can't buy your way into, everyone is here for one reason or another. Maybe everyone is good at something, math, science, literature, sports. Maybe the person running the school is looking for people to fill roads in some grand plan. The point here is that it is a group of people in a somewhat isolated, educational setting where each character should have some reason for being selected. I personally hope that for a twink oriented story, but I'm also just curious to see where this all goes. Good luck.
9/7/17, 3:22 AM
I apologize for the really long chapter. But I couldn't stop writing. It might be a slog of a read. I just hope you all enjoy the pay-off
clane61@yahoo.com
9/7/17, 3:01 AM
Good one. Nice intro. Only negative is female voice. It took me out of the story
Anonymous
9/7/17, 2:44 AM
I'd love a progressive not so futuristic world with any number of genetic style modificational devices. That way nothings really off the table.
Anonymous
9/7/17, 2:29 AM
I think this is one of my favorite stories in this site. It pushes all of the right buttons for me
Anonymous
9/7/17, 2:01 AM
very interesting
Anonymous
9/7/17, 1:39 AM
I'd love more thank you!
JR
9/7/17, 1:14 AM
At the doctors office to get a physical.
marc frank
9/6/17, 11:59 PM
yeah..repeated section.... but great story.....next time add some visuals
Jon
9/6/17, 11:18 PM
School, and I love the premise