Recent Comments

9/7/17, 5:34 PM
Trust me, I know the feeling. I also have a hard time getting motivated to write and post new stories when I get minimal feedback. All I can say is that I'm rereading the chapter right now and loving it even more the second time (especially now that I'm at home and can stroke along while I read it). And I'm really excited to see where the story goes next, now that the collective has a bunch of giants at its bidding.
9/7/17, 5:08 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Hypnothrill. I am never sure whether readers actually want another chapter. There have been 5 chapters so far. And with each new chapter, the responses and comments are less and less. The last chapter only had 2 comments. And so, if I feel there's a lack of interest, this might be Fusion's last chapter. I'm getting to the point of why bother taking the time to write a story if the reader can't be bothered to make a comment.
Doctorruff
9/7/17, 2:57 PM
Just curious if there is an update for day 2/ more story? Really loved this story cannot wait for more.
Happy Endings
9/7/17, 2:14 PM
Oh wow, wasn't expecting this much praise, thanks! Honestly I haven't thought about what I'd write about next since this was an experiment but I can give it some thought.
Anonymous
9/7/17, 1:24 PM
This was great. Hope you keep writing and post another story soon!
Anonymous
9/7/17, 1:17 PM
Great story, well done!
Anonymous
9/7/17, 11:46 AM
This is excellent. Please, keep writing!
9/7/17, 11:44 AM
Don't apologize! This series is fantastic, and I'm so glad you're continuing it. Some incredibly hot scenes here--I especially liked the stuff with the cops.
Anonymous
9/7/17, 11:37 AM
I love that you continued it! Hott Story!!! I also second the visuals!
screamingmoist
9/7/17, 11:29 AM
Yep! Digging through my stories I found some that never got cross posted. There's probably a big overlap from the sites, but might be new to someone. Hard to believe that much time has passed already!