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marc frank
9/6/17, 9:45 PM
great story.....next time what about some visuals of the guys...etc...??????
oinkoink
9/6/17, 9:34 PM
Set sometime in the future after a major worldwide disaster occurs. Natural, unnatural or otherwise. Placed inside of a deep underground military base. Deep below the perhaps ruined earth in a series of winding tunnels, cavernous rooms are filled with machinery. Test tubes and wires litter some chambers while nothing but rows of seats litter others. In those rooms one could find perverse tapestry and imagery of all sorts almost ritualistic in design. Some of these rooms offer metallic as well as leather restraints in rows along the wall and in others large empty vats. A dull chanting can be somewhat heard throughout the entire facility one would almost wonder if they are really hearing anything at all. Darkened corridors lend themselves to many outcomes, another one such being a living quarter, and large open shower and bathroom area. And of course there is an exit, one single elevator shaft to the surface. Mind the other noises though, besides the chanting and the footsteps.. it would seem there are other less than amicable guests wandering the very same labyrinth you are.
marc frank
9/6/17, 9:19 PM
amazing story....and as usual super visuals.....keep it up...always looking forward to a new story from you
Anonymous
9/6/17, 9:06 PM
he'll get bored and reads a different story
bikerhunk92
9/6/17, 8:45 PM
If you don't like bikes or bikers, why are you reading a story blatantly about them? lol.
Anonymous
9/6/17, 8:16 PM
Private post-secondary boarding school, within the first week of classes
AT
9/6/17, 8:08 PM
What a wonderful idea. How about following the implicit prompt and starting in an actual doctor's office? Modern day.
Hairyballs
9/6/17, 7:51 PM
Oh my God! This is even hotter than chapter one, cant wait to see how the bike (God is it sexy!) changes them both.
Anonymous
9/6/17, 7:34 PM
Thanks for sharing that!!
Anonymous
9/6/17, 2:04 PM
Interesting!!