Recent Comments

clane61@yahoo.com
9/7/17, 3:01 AM
Good one. Nice intro. Only negative is female voice. It took me out of the story
Anonymous
9/7/17, 2:44 AM
I'd love a progressive not so futuristic world with any number of genetic style modificational devices. That way nothings really off the table.
Anonymous
9/7/17, 2:29 AM
I think this is one of my favorite stories in this site. It pushes all of the right buttons for me
Anonymous
9/7/17, 2:01 AM
very interesting
Anonymous
9/7/17, 1:39 AM
I'd love more thank you!
JR
9/7/17, 1:14 AM
At the doctors office to get a physical.
marc frank
9/6/17, 11:59 PM
yeah..repeated section.... but great story.....next time add some visuals
Jon
9/6/17, 11:18 PM
School, and I love the premise
Anonymous
9/6/17, 10:27 PM
I liked the school idea
marc frank
9/6/17, 9:45 PM
great story.....next time what about some visuals of the guys...etc...??????