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9/15/24, 11:36 PM
I think the real strength of this story comes from the three friends and their interactions, which I really enjoyed. A really fun romp that's light and easy to read, while still maintaining that spooky undertone and spirit, all while being really hot as you watch these straight bros lose their inhibitions. Good work!
9/15/24, 10:03 PM
Very nice start. I loved the transformation and the hint of what’s to come. Ryder’s language changing and his desires changing were very hot. Him being a himbo top is really hot.

9/15/24, 10:15 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Glad you liked it.
9/14/24, 7:33 PM
Whoa! "Piggybacking" is absolutely the best! I can't stop feeling "thrilled" just from reading the story. I can't imagine what they are experiencing with "Piggybacking" firsthand. I really hope some technology like this will be developed in the future. :smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp: And... How poor Scott is. Even though he is subdued by the system, his sync rate seems apparently lower than his opponent's. Or maybe he threw the match intentionally on purpose? I was also surprised by the direction the story took, but let's see where you want to take us to. Also, "The Zone" remains a mystery. We only know its name and nothing else. Hmm... this must be intentional... I'm soooo curious about it and can't wanittt to see what will happen next!

9/14/24, 7:57 PM
@[BlackMaple](/user/show/180252) Wow! Okay ... both you and Tofu83 are really asking great questions. But I can't answer them because I'm afraid it'll spoil the upcoming chapters. Only after editing this story was I reminded why I chose the title "The Zone". And I also realized that I probably didn't do the best job in tying the title to the story. I do know that when talking to Scott, Hawk mentioned the Zone. But the title definitely plays a big part. So please remind me, once Chapter 9 is posted, the importance of the title. And in that vein, Tofu83 mentioned: "The protagonist’s name remains Scott instead of changing to the recruit’s number X-88. Does it imply that his minds have not been completely reprogrammed and he is still attached to things outside of the program? Does the program want them to keep these?" Again, as with the title, there's a definite reason for this. But I'm afraid that answering this question here would spoil the story. So I'm hoping to be reminded of this question as well. Okay ... YES!!! Piggybacking!!! I always envisioned that it would be the ability for our brain to process multiple perspectives simultaneously. So in a sex scene, you could experience fucking a guy, and at the same time, be the guy that's getting fucked. How awesome would that be?!!! That your brain could process multiple sensory inputs at the same time. And if your brain could process two, could it do three? Four? How many perspectives could one person handle? I found this important because ... when you think about it ... you're basically building towards a hive mind. A man's ability to let go of its "original" identity, and assume or allow another's identity in ... that would be fundamental in having a hive mind ... and in becoming a drone. I think in modern society, we've been indoctrinated to think of me me me. I'm not sure whether it's society, or perhaps just human nature ... but we're just selfish creatures. That's why in the military, during basic training, boot camp is designed to break down a soldier's independent identity, or transition them towards a more team way of thinking. I think it was my intention, when writing this story, that I was trying to do something similar. That recruits have to be broken down, tested and evaluated whether they could become a drone. Piggybacking is definitely a way to test that.

9/15/24, 10:09 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Yeah, the Hive Mind is the essence of drones, and you do a great job of narrating its implementation in various ways. Apparently, you have a lot of thoughts on this, I hope we'll have more opportunities to hear more in the future. I'm also glad to know that I'm not the only one who considers it as an essential aspect. :kissing_heart: My interest in this idea maybe began with playing StarCraft, and I'm sure Star Terk has also reinforced this fascination. "Piggybacking" immediately reminds me of it. StarCraft itself is a good example of this (both Zerg and Protoss, and even Terrans has some kind of concept like this), and the military is always trying to achieve similar effect to enhance the power of soldiers. Even if soldiers can only sense each other, this connection provides a significant boost. Indeed, in a way, the military is on the path to becoming drones, also, this idea is quite natural somehow. Organizations like the military would undoubtedly benefit greatly from it. Just imagine how powerful selfless drone squads could be! I always get excited thinking about this, and that would be a big upgrade for humans.
Anonymous
9/15/24, 7:53 PM
i’ve been trying to find this derek story but i can’t find it anywhere! do you have a link or something?

9/15/24, 8:37 PM
@Anonymous https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/jock-buddy/
9/15/24, 8:37 PM
Hey, everyone, thank you so much for the kind words about the story and for supporting me, it really means a lot :) for everyone asking, here is the link for Jock Buddy (apologies, but the author’s name is Derek Philips, not Derek Williams lol), enjoy! https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/jock-buddy/
HypnoMutt
9/15/24, 3:35 AM
Yes, by all means, continue with these characters and the world you've created! You've got a rich milieu filled with distinct, memorable characters and a solid concept, beautifully executed. Lots of potential here. Excellent chapter in every regard, hot AF, sets up your conclusion nicely. Can't wait!

9/15/24, 8:32 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) Very kind and welcome words indeed. Not a lot of people in my real life can/will read my work (admittedly, it is niche). The worst feeling is sending these chapters off into the ether and feeling like it is just being dropped into a black hole. A simple kind work like this sends my writing enthusiasm up to an "11" on the dial. Working on the final chapter of this novela now, and outlining the next novela. May Luna bless you, HypnoMutt.
Guest
9/15/24, 8:07 PM
This was so fantastic and fun! I could read endless stories about Norman helping Dahlia out with her suitors
Anonymous
9/15/24, 7:54 PM
Awesome story as always! Keep up the good work, I love ur stories!
Zander
9/15/24, 7:43 PM
Great story, with a complete ending. But with great potential for continuation). But I hope you finish the story about the Monarch of the Abyss.
Anonymous
9/15/24, 7:05 PM
This is the hottest story I've read on this site. Would love to see a continuation where the Dhruv-ification keeps spreading, maybe even infecting some women (if you are into that). Really great stuff!