Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/27/17, 5:04 AM
Wish you could show us practices and game plays.
Kovu
8/27/17, 12:29 AM
Hey, writer of the story... I really liked the concept behind this and it would be so much hotter if there were some structure in the sentences. Perhaps find a drone to proof read and correct your stories before posting them? I am certain you can find a drone slave who will do this for you. :)
8/26/17, 8:17 PM
This is insanely hot. I would love to study Cole, no matter what I turned into.
Anonymous
8/26/17, 8:11 PM
Simply exquisite man
Anonymous
8/26/17, 6:14 PM
I'm really glad that you've returned to this. I'm enjoying the piece. It's lengthy, takes time to develop characters and story lines and brings the era alive. Please keep up the excellent work!
Anonymous
8/26/17, 4:53 PM
I loved it! Those poor guys,but this story was something else. Thank you for that
Anonymous
8/26/17, 4:35 PM
good concept. However the point of view gets confusing when you start switching between first and third person.
Anonymous
8/26/17, 3:45 PM
MORE. Please more
Anonymous
8/26/17, 2:06 PM
Great story. Please keep writing.
Knotty
8/26/17, 1:46 PM
Another great story! Love your writing!