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Nnnrg
8/25/17, 9:09 PM
I was just remembering this story and was curious if you've thought much about the fifth part.
Swizzington
8/25/17, 8:39 PM
Hey! Pretty good story. I enjoyed it. You aren't going to catch every typo in your work - I certainly don't in mine - but I would encourage you to do a slightly more thorough proofread of this. There's a few errors. It can break the immersion sometimes - just saying! I had to laugh when Tod was looking over the job advertisement and read the criteria "Won't be missed by anyone" and did not even think to question it. Not sure how realistic that is! But yeah, still a good story!
8/25/17, 7:47 PM
More changes! I hope it ends well. Please continue!
ChaoticDjinn
8/25/17, 7:46 PM
The last turn was Ned's the square he landed on just happened to change Andy since he was the only freshly showered guy in the room. The couplet at the end was Ned's , its just no one saw it until Andy took his next turn.
Anonymous
8/25/17, 7:16 PM
Yeh, I second that. Always *enjoy* your stuff so much, and you write really well.
8/25/17, 7:03 PM
@nycboot Most definitely!
nycboot
8/25/17, 4:03 PM
Thank you! I love these weird alien takeover stories. Will there be a subsequent installment?
Marvyn Greene
8/25/17, 3:42 PM
This is very well written indeed. Well done.
Anonymous
8/25/17, 3:02 PM
loving this
Anonymous
8/25/17, 2:49 PM
shoudnt it ben neds turn? btw nice story