Recent Comments

Xackery
9/15/24, 2:17 PM
This is so sweet, not to mention very hot! Do you plan on continuing this?
Pauly
9/15/24, 2:12 PM
love the tension!!!
Anonymous
9/15/24, 1:40 PM
Amazing! Every possible 'next chapter' you suggest would be incredible... maybe in escalating intensity... workplace, team locker room, little black book, truck stop...
9/15/24, 12:10 PM
Wow, it just keeps getting better. Love the entire story. Keep it coming!

9/15/24, 12:51 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Hopefully, you are as well. Wink.
9/15/24, 12:41 PM
Also, the smells, the pheromone, the mansmell... THAT WORKS FOR ME! Do you have any more to share? I love your stories because I am INTO the strength and masculinity of men and the smells that accompany them.
9/15/24, 12:35 PM
WOW! Just fun to read! The power exchange ... it was so exciting. WELL written! THANK YOU
Anonymous
9/15/24, 5:10 AM
I really, really like the direction you're leading these superheroes to their downfall. I've rated the previous chapters, it's all so good and hot, although this is my first comment on your story. I love it. I'm anxious to see the extent of the damage on Superman's brain with all of those "fryied cells", I like the idea of Superman still being partially himself, but all careless and stupid on horniness and gooning. It was a great idea to give Dick erectile dysfunction issues to destroy his self-confidence, and to turn Bruce into a pathetic, whiny coward beggar. I'm wanting to see how Dr. Kumar will discover the secret identities of the now-not-so dynamic duo and see both of them sunk in poverty. If you allow me a suggestion, please, keep them in their superhero costumes all three of them, I mean. That's a big part of their identity, so now you're turning them into a perverted reverse of their former selves, it would be hot if they keep their superhero costumes as a mockery reminder of how awesome they used to be.

9/15/24, 11:48 AM
@Anonymous Wow, thank you for taking the time to comment and to rate the stories. I can’t promise that what you’re asking for is going to be appearing, but I hope you like the next chapter “a bird gets plucked.”
1/20/21, 4:50 AM
Tenia pensado hacerlo mas largo, pero como el resto no me terminaba de convencer lo deje asi. Quizas despues...

Zander
9/15/24, 11:34 AM
@[El Observador](/user/show/10002507) I hope a new chapter will come out and the story is not abandoned)? Story The Crow?
Zander
9/15/24, 11:33 AM
I hope a new chapter will come out and the story is not abandoned)?
Zander
9/15/24, 11:26 AM
I hope the sequel will come out soon) and there will be many chapters. I want to know what incident will end the story that was described in the prologue