Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/24/17, 9:12 AM
It sucks this was never finished. It was really hot.
Ragnarok
8/24/17, 8:25 AM
Agreed this is some really hott stuff. Would love to see it expanded into a series with more habit changing. You could introduce new characters and kinks and do all kinds of fun.
LongtimeFan
8/24/17, 7:41 AM
Well done! :) Keep it up!
Anonymous
8/24/17, 6:41 AM
Really good premise. My advice is that, while I liked the slow boil, it could have been distributed a little differently. I felt like it was him admiring guys one second and then he was getting fucked. It was a little jarring. Good story
UchihaDEMS
8/24/17, 4:56 AM
Nice chapter, I still want Ginger to loose against Bieber tho
Andyrew36
8/24/17, 3:45 AM
I am currently working on an interactive story on my Patreon! The next part of the story is a guy turning into a leather daddy and making his dad his boy, if any of you want to join and read!
Anonymous
8/24/17, 3:10 AM
Love it.
Anonymous
8/24/17, 2:37 AM
Punctuation is terrible as is the grammer and just about everything else. Most people here just patronize the authors.
Anonymous
8/24/17, 2:17 AM
Loved it! The political-religious intrigue provided an excellent background.
Anonymous
8/24/17, 1:15 AM
Being a writer is not just putting words on a page. Not intending to be too mean but basic punctuation, use of capital letters and basic paragraphing is primary school stuff. We should not have to offer to proofread someone else's writing! That is part of the "job". If you cannot make basic sentences it is not writing, sorry.