Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/23/17, 12:16 PM
Well bieber is getting a lot more sex as a puppy than he was b4, that's kind of winning
8/23/17, 11:37 AM
Agreed with the post above, Bieber has to win despite the cuteness!
tattcub
8/23/17, 9:49 AM
Great idea for a story but I'm guessing English isn't your first language ? To be brave enough to have a go and write in another language is no small achievement. Well done. If you need help with grammar and wording I am sure many people on here would be willing to help. Keep writing. Don't allow the negative comments to stop you.
AeonFlux
8/23/17, 9:48 AM
If you're not even have the ball's to coment someones writings with your name or nick........ don't put the autor down Much more readeble than the first....... still could be better 😁 Thanx for writing....... hope to read more from you
MalSkin
8/23/17, 8:38 AM
I agree with some of the comments that are above, do not let one comment put you off writing, you will only improve...I love it when I read comments eg the one who said son and they don't put their name on it....they might not even try to wrote a story carry on
Anonymous
8/23/17, 7:41 AM
Very hot. You could have been far better in terms of writing. Hope the story is getting hotter!!
Anonymous
8/23/17, 6:40 AM
Let bieber win in the end and be master of all
Anonymous
8/23/17, 6:03 AM
If you enjoy writing, then keep at it. You will only get better. Don't listen to that arsehole that says you shouldn't bother.
8/23/17, 5:44 AM
Still hot. And I still want more :)
Dec 20, 2008
Anonymous
8/23/17, 5:10 AM
Holy shit, hands down the best story I have ever read!